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| Author: | fulton_greene [ Wed Mar 19, 2014 6:42 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Situation: Friend from freshman year of university, haven't talked to her in about a year. heard she is recently single, so i messaged her about some end of college events we have coming up. Me: are you coming on the brewery tour tomorrow? HB9:no idk any ppl who are ! Me:what happened, i thought you had friends? Me:you know at least one person gong Me:we have a crew going, youre welcome to come with HB9:haha i already have plans for tmrw tho now i think. HB9:and no i dnt have cool friends apparentlyyy HB9:who;s all going Me:its not too late to find some cool friends Me:we have a group of about 10, but many others are goign Me:a lot from old dorm HB9:haha sounds like a legit group HB9:id probs feel outta place tho HB9:arent u all like buddy buddy? Me:if you're scared, i can hold your hand through it HB9:aw fulton Me:its a group of 150 seniors getting an all you can drink beer tour Me: if thats you out of place, i dont know what place you fit in Me: and i thought you were the outgoing party girl HB9:hahahha i totalyl am you know that BUT like i said, probs not i think i have other plans if not- ill let u know Me:maybe i forgot, i havent seen you in action in a long time if you choose to come, you know how to reach me HB9:of course- i appreciate you reaching out Me:for sure, senior year is slowly slipping away HB9: ahh baby boy ive graduated in decemeber but i completley agree are you doing any other senior stuff ? Me:oh excuse me Me:i didnt know you were such a mature graduate already HB9:ur excused HB9:dude u know it HB9:hahaha Me: im doing the senior cruise HB9:ugh i wanted to do that but they sold outta tickets so fast HB9:blah me:youre missing the boat on everything.no pun intended me:so do you feel like an old woman now that youre graduated? HB9:bahahha seriously wtf i suck yeah i do feel like an old woman i sohuld probs be going thru menapause soon boobs are starting to hit the floor downhill man Me:oh god you start becoming that desperate cougar snooping around campus trying to pick up college guys take advtange while you still look the part HB9: dude i feel like you know me so well i really do gotta get on it while they're still young and willing Me: maybe i know you. maybe im just into cougars....probably both HB9:dum dum dummmmmmmm Me: i gotta run if you're not coming tomorrow, lets go out for some drinks next week. you can see what its like to go out with a college guy again HB9:. helll yeah lets do that dnt forget! ttyl Me: wont. ciao What do you think? |
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| Author: | fulton_greene [ Wed Mar 19, 2014 6:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Oh gosh I did not think the spacing would be so horrific. Sorry to anyone that reads that line of messaging. It is painful on my own eyes. |
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| Author: | Hejsan [ Wed Mar 19, 2014 8:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
I think its kinda solid. Your not too pushy and offered her some value. Doesnt sound needy to me. However when she asked you like "HB9:no idk any ppl who are !" You let yourself pull into her frame ... last time I replied to some girl I do know: So far 2 persons, you and me ... if thats not reason enough to come I dont know ... It worked out fine for me. However the rest is quiete solid. Plan a cocktail date or such with more ahead later on in the evening. Date, talk, Kino and escalate. |
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| Author: | Vincenity [ Wed Mar 19, 2014 10:50 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Pretty solid. One trick I learnt is never to be the last to text. For eg, there's no need for a "won't. Ciao" since you both alr said ttyl. Just another way you can demonstrate non neediness. |
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| Author: | CharlesFinley [ Wed Mar 19, 2014 1:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Looked mostly fine to me. And she does look interested. Keep it up. |
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| Author: | Musterion [ Sat Mar 22, 2014 2:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Personally, right now I think you're in the friend zone or very close to it. Her over use of words like "man" and "dude" is the kind of thing I only see from girls when they're friends with a guy, or guys say to other guys. Quote: Me:if you're scared, i can hold your hand through it
This "aw fulton" would send alarm bells ringing for friend zone if this were me, you're being 'sweet' and we all know where being 'sweet' gets you (unless you have mad game in other areas).
HB9:aw fulton Quote: if you choose to come, you know how to reach me
Quote: you start becoming that desperate cougar snooping around campus trying to pick up college guys
take advtange while you still look the part Quote: Me: maybe i know you. maybe im just into cougars....probably both
To me this comes across a bit needy. The 'while you still look the part' I think saves you a bit here as an easy neg so props for that, but for me it's just a bit too obvious that you're trying to get with her. Having already invited her somewhere and she's flaked saying she "thinks" she has plans tomorrow, I'm sorry but, MOST people tend to know what they're doing tomorrow, especially if it is particular plans, this is very vague and I think she's just making an excuse here dude and a poor one at that.I don't think this is dead in the water by any means but I think you need to detach a little and make her work for you more. Very interesting though! |
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| Author: | fulton_greene [ Sat Mar 22, 2014 9:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique this facebook chat with HB9 |
Thanks guys, appreciate all the advice. |
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