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| Author: | wanabepua [ Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Is this too strong of a nag/opner |
HEY, I saw a girl at starbucks with a really cute dog, i when up to the dog and start cudding it as it was on the floor, I ask the girl for the dog name, she said it shelly, the girl was really cute too so from no where i just said this. Me: looking at her with a confuse face, I am confuse now Hb7: why Me : Well i cant make up my mind as to who is more cuter who or shelly, (she was shock dint know what to say for a good 30sec then she said are u serious. Me: look straight into her eye with a smile, and said what do you think, before she could answer. Me: (with big smile)naa you are right there is no competition, shelly is way cuter,any ways got to run but do you come here a lot, because i would definitely would like to see shelly again,I am thinking of saving a dog life by get one from the impound and would like some thing like shelly,may be next time I see you, we can have a cup of coffe togeather and you can tell me lilttle about dog care. Hb7: sure Me: cool by the way i am blah and you are ...... Hb7: sahra me : sahra i will catch u later, tc bye. I know I know i dint get a number or a date or time, i need u guys to tell me how could i have made it work better for me.also do u think it was very rude of me to say what i said. [/b] |
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| Author: | Sinner [ Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:24 pm ] |
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Sounds like you probably weren't congruent. And also I wouldn't have used that because essentially you conveyed interest implying that shes some form of cute. You might want to change it to be "Why such a cool dog wants to hang around with you" and maybe start a playful competition on who the dog likes better. |
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| Author: | negsta [ Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:06 pm ] |
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Hmmm...paying attention to the dog was good though, a little more smoothness and congruence could have gotten you the n-close. |
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| Author: | xLINKx [ Wed Sep 12, 2007 11:28 pm ] |
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Kinda creepy if you're into the dog that much, but that's my opinion. |
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| Author: | Mr Fahrenheit [ Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:03 am ] |
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How is that creepy??? our out of your mind. What, he wants to f-close the dog? grow up. He's just looking for advice from a dog owner. In reply to Topic: No, your neg isnt to harsch. But its veru conditional, you might only have ime to use it mabye once in a blue moon. |
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| Author: | Jack [ Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:14 am ] |
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I agree. I think its pretty creepy. look at the whole three words she said 1.why 2.sure 3.sarah shes WAYYYY interested!!!! .......................................... Wannabepua. I like your attempt, however, you simply need to change a few things. Me: looking at her with a confuse face, I am confuse now Hb7: why Me : Well i cant make up my mind as to who is more cuter who or shelly I dont like how you telegraphed interest (she was shock dint know what to say for a good 30sec then she said are u serious. Me: look straight into her eye with a smile, and said what do you think, before she could answer. Me: (with big smile) good naa you are right there is no competition, shelly is way cuter,any ways got to run good but do you come here a lot, because i would definitely would like to see shelly again, the ship just sunk I am thinking of saving a dog life by get one from the impound and would like some thing like shelly,may be next time I see you, we can have a cup of coffe togeather and you can tell me lilttle about dog care. SOOOO close to being good, remember, make it about you, not about her Hb7: sure Me: cool by the way i am blah and you are ...... Hb7: sahra me : sahra i will catch u later, tc bye. [/i][/u] |
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| Author: | wanabepua [ Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Thank You |
Hey thank you all for your input, jack thanks for breaking it down and explaning me as to what was good and what needs to be changed, I look forward to learn much more from you. |
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