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Author:  henry3g [ Thu May 03, 2012 10:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Look this over n tell me my mistakes please.
Today at school, I meet a girl who is about 7-8
And this is our conversation, please read it and give me advise On how to get better next time.


Me: hey, this is like the 2 time I have seen u around and I had to come and compliment u on how good u look u that(it was dressup day)
Her: oh haven't notice and thanks
Me: so what ur name?
Her:blah blah
Me: blah blah, even tho I haven't seen u smile for like the past 1 min of know u, i know u have a sexy smile
Her: (smile) thanks
Me: and I was right
Her: on what
Me:ur smile
Her:( smile as her feet pointed at me)
Me: where are u headed?
Her: English
Me: I don't wanna get u late, so can I walk with u?
Her: sure
Me:some guys just almost hit me in the face with the door, and I told him to watch out and he wanted to fight.. Jerks in this schoo
Her: tell me about it.
Me: u seems like u know how to throw down
Her: I don't fight
Me: so if what just happen to me happen to u, what would u hav don't?
Her: same as u
Me : copy cat
Her: oh whatever dude, i call it being the bigger woman
( she reach to her class)
Me: so I was right about meeting u, ur fun talking to.. Can I get ur number, I would like to talk to u more
Her: no
Me:why not
Her: don't know u
Me: im kinda hoping to change that
Her: gotta go dude, bye
I know there were sometimes when she was cold and I should have use the push and pull, but I couldn't thiink of any thing that want rude, I was kinda note talking to her, I enjoy sexual conversations.
Author:  Ponch41 [ Fri May 04, 2012 5:55 pm ]
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There was no life in the conversation man. Gotta make her laugh and get some iois first.
Author:  wanna_learn [ Fri May 04, 2012 6:44 pm ]
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as Ponch41 said, there was no game at all. boring stuff that did not stand out. read some books to get the basics, thats the only logical advice I guess.
Author:  henry3g [ Sat May 05, 2012 12:34 am ]
Post subject:  Thanks
Thanks guys, I'm on it.
Author:  wildchildAFC [ Sat May 05, 2012 1:00 am ]
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No attraction created.
Author:  killermunkyz [ Sat May 05, 2012 7:38 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Look this over n tell me my mistakes please.
Quote:
Today at school, I meet a girl who is about 7-8
And this is our conversation, please read it and give me advise On how to get better next time.


Me: hey, this is like the 2 time I have seen u around and I had to come and compliment u on how good u look u that(it was dressup day)
Her: oh haven't notice and thanks
Me: so what ur name?
Her:blah blah
Me: blah blah, even tho I haven't seen u smile for like the past 1 min of know u, i know u have a sexy smile
Her: (smile) thanks
Me: and I was right
Her: on what
Me:ur smile
Her:( smile as her feet pointed at me)
Me: where are u headed?
Her: English
Me: I don't wanna get u late, so can I walk with u?
Her: sure
Me:some guys just almost hit me in the face with the door, and I told him to watch out and he wanted to fight.. Jerks in this schoo
Her: tell me about it.
Me: u seems like u know how to throw down
Her: I don't fight
Me: so if what just happen to me happen to u, what would u hav don't?
Her: same as u
Me : copy cat
Her: oh whatever dude, i call it being the bigger woman
( she reach to her class)
Me: so I was right about meeting u, ur fun talking to.. Can I get ur number, I would like to talk to u more
Her: no
Me:why not
Her: don't know u
Me: im kinda hoping to change that
Her: gotta go dude, bye
I know there were sometimes when she was cold and I should have use the push and pull, but I couldn't thiink of any thing that want rude, I was kinda note talking to her, I enjoy sexual conversations.
I'm assuming you're really new to PUA. No offense meant if you're not, but honestly, that was just plain really bad. You're not getting alot of really solid useful advice here so far (no offense to any of the other posters I'm sure you know alot of good stuff and just don't have time to share it now), so I'm going to try to give you some stuff you can actually use.

Corrections:

#1
you complimented her on her looks. She's heard that all her life. compliment her on something else like her style or personality, or better yet. don't do it at all at least not until you've built attraction first and know you are getting a number.

#2
Don't worry about looking rude. who cares what she thinks? just don't be a total dick.

#3
Tease her playfully about something.

#4
I used that same smile line too when I was first starting out. It never works :). I think I know where you got it from. If it's where I think you did I'm going to say forget everything you learned there. sosuave.com? david deangelo (not as bad)? he's got some good stuff, but alot of it is ht or miss. I'd actually like to know where you got it from. There's alot of PUAs out there selling stuff that's complete bullshit.

This is an example of a successful pick up that I did recently with one of my friends at the mall. killer-munky-and-the-sauce-field-report ... highlight= There's some complex stuff here, but I tried to break it down as much as I could so even a newby can get it. If you need anything explained post on the thread and I'll try to answer your questions when I see them.

Once again, I'm assuming you're new to this. If so, here is some stuff that will help you.

If you want some good material to learn from look for stuff online (especially on youtube) by Neil Strauss (Style, #1 PUA in the world for a while), Eric Von Markovik (Mystery, Style's guru), Sinn (Forgot His Real Name... eh... he's alright), Carlos Xuma (Decent), Richard LaRuina (Gambler, REALLY GOOD), Adam Lyons (AFC Adam current debated#1 PUA in the world), Vin DiCarlo (Really good, deep stuff), and David DeAngelo (least recommended, but easiest to understand when just starting out). Read some of their ebooks, but the videos are the best for learning game fast.

In my opinion the best one on this list is Adam Lyons, second is Gambler, and third is Vin DiCarlo but their stuff might be too advanced for you, so I'd start with stuff by Neil Strauss and David DeAngelo. That's where I started. Read The Game by Neil Strauss and Double Your Dating by David DeAngelo, and then The Attraction Code by Vin DiCarlo and learn the advanced stuff.

DiCarlo's DVD programs are the shit. They really improved my game. If you can afford DVD programs get Conversation Cure by Vin DiCarlo.

A guy named 2solista has alot of good material on his youtube page. It's good beginner stuff. Watch all of the videos by Neil Strauss on his playlist.

Practice everything you learn. There's alot of good free advice on this site. My suggestion, START HERE:

the-newbie-mission-vt41556.html

newbie-faq-introduction-to-pua-vt44144.html

terms-of-importance-great-for-new-members-vt3077.html

approaching-and-opening-vf51.html


Good luck. I love helping newbies. It wasn't long ago I was there. I wasted 9 years reading and not doing. Do both. Don't make my mistake.
Author:  Ponch41 [ Fri May 18, 2012 3:32 pm ]
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One more thing. Be sure to smile, from reading this, if you had a straight face I cannot imagine how awkward that was. Another thing this was like an interview, don't do that. As you get better though it will become natural.
Author:  skills360 [ Fri May 18, 2012 6:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Look this over n tell me my mistakes please.
Quote:
Today at school, I meet a girl who is about 7-8
And this is our conversation, please read it and give me advise On how to get better next time.


Me: hey, this is like the 2 time I have seen u around and I had to come and compliment u on how good u look u that(it was dressup day)
Her: oh haven't notice and thanks
Me: so what ur name?
Her:blah blah
Me: blah blah, even tho I haven't seen u smile for like the past 1 min of know u, i know u have a sexy smile
Her: (smile) thanks
Me: and I was right
Her: on what
Me:ur smile
Her:( smile as her feet pointed at me)
Me: where are u headed?
Her: English
Me: I don't wanna get u late, so can I walk with u?
Her: sure
Me:some guys just almost hit me in the face with the door, and I told him to watch out and he wanted to fight.. Jerks in this schoo
Her: tell me about it.
Me: u seems like u know how to throw down
Her: I don't fight
Me: so if what just happen to me happen to u, what would u hav don't?
Her: same as u
Me : copy cat
Her: oh whatever dude, i call it being the bigger woman
( she reach to her class)
Me: so I was right about meeting u, ur fun talking to.. Can I get ur number, I would like to talk to u more
Her: no
Me:why not
Her: don't know u
Me: im kinda hoping to change that
Her: gotta go dude, bye
I know there were sometimes when she was cold and I should have use the push and pull, but I couldn't thiink of any thing that want rude, I was kinda note talking to her, I enjoy sexual conversations.
I put in bold all of the mistakes, you need to learn game, attraction code vin dicarlo, get some basic stuff like david d(just learn the psycology) no the funny lines, or the cocky funny etc...You need to lead, do not ask for permittion can i get your number? is it ok? all that nice guy stuff don't work... Fighting, being reactive, altercations is a turn off... then begging another turn off.. you have a long way to go, but i see potential, learn the basic, follow warped mindless newbie guide in the lounge for now...till you get the books i ask you to get...
Author:  skimagic345 [ Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:55 pm ]
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wow that conversation sounds exactly like me! trying to avoid interview mode by saying things like you, no life in it. I need that same help as well.. thats why I stayed away from the internet because of so suave I was like these lines are ridiculous they never work, hopefully this site is better
Author:  killermunkyz [ Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:11 pm ]
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Quote:
wow that conversation sounds exactly like me! trying to avoid interview mode by saying things like you, no life in it. I need that same help as well.. thats why I stayed away from the internet because of so suave I was like these lines are ridiculous they never work, hopefully this site is better
That's where I first started learning game. It's weak as hell. This forum is way better. Like it's like the comparing a junker to a Ferrari.
Author:  DoIt4TheWood [ Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:24 pm ]
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I have to agree with most of the guys here. You complimented her which put the ball and her court, weren't interesting at all, and DLV'd when you said you were almost hit in the face by the door.
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