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Author:  AthleticSmartass [ Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Criticize my POF profile please
This is my POF profile: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=30715222
So far my success quota is miserable. What do I need to change?
I appreciate your suggestions!
Author:  Mr_Unpredictable [ Fri Aug 26, 2011 3:41 pm ]
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Apart from that, I spend my time working on my PhD research which of course is going to safe the world ;)

I noticed something in your profile, I don't know if it was intentional or not, but instead of "save the world" you wrote "safe the world".

Now was that on purpose? You know, in order to catch the attention of the opposite sex? If so, I applaud you my good sir.

If not, keep it the grammatical error. Because woman might think "wow, how does this guy who is working on a PhD make such an error" and they'll PM you.
Author:  Lodewijkp [ Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:25 pm ]
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aside from your solo pictures .. get some pictures with you and woman... preselection. doesn't matter who .. maybe someone on the street.

drop the tie .. it's horrible .. it should look open and loose .. more like a fuck you charisma... don't wear student like clothing .. just wear some white or black shirts.

don't tell people you are drinking socially .. woman will think that you are trying to fit in.. like you are suplicating...just write '' sometimes '' or not at all.

change your status from single to unknown...otherwise woman will think you are desperate searching for pussy.

don't write down dating only .. also do friendship... some woman cannot swallow the dating word.

do you want children .. write down possibly or something like that .. almost all woman want children or they have at least fantasies about having chilren.

do you have a car ... unknown.... don't be too open .. especially about stupid questions.

intent should be different ... you are looking for fun .. fun frienships and fun dates.

erase relationship status ... not important...
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Hey! Are you funny, confident and intelligent? Then I'd like to get to know you!
I'm very ethusiastic about sports, in particular running. Actually, I'm one of those crazy guys who voluntarily run a Marathon. If you can keep up with this, that's definitely a huge plus! But I also enjoy less painful activities like hanging out with friends, watching movies, going out and I'm always open to experience new things. In particular, I like to learn about other countries and cultures. My favourite travel destination so far was Italy - not only because of the food... Apart from that, I spend my time working on my PhD research which of course is going to safe the world ;)
this is what im typing on the spot ( improvised )

hey im funny ....you would like to get to know me

im very enthusiastic about life ... especially about sports and food.... i try to combine everything... i always run marathons to the nearest restaurant. I also enjoy very painfull activities like hanging around with friends .. watching movies .. going out and picking up chicks. Im never open to new things unless you make me ! I do like to learn about other countries and cultures.. my favorite destination was italy because it had so much history , alot of boring museums and very hot looking and fun woman. Hell i didn't had time to eat in italy because i got distracted soo much ;). I spend my time working on my PhD research...im very professional but im probably are going to blow up earth.

Do you want to run to the nearest restaurant
Do you like travel and other cultures
Do you like to see me blowing up Labs
Do you like italian woman like me
And above all ... do you hate boring museums..

then look no further.
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