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| Author: | darkstar1731 [ Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:38 am ] |
| Post subject: | Awesome profile? Tell me what you think. |
I"m pretty satisfied with my current Okcupid profile, but I want to know what you think. One girl sent me a message saying "The first two lines, *applause*". I also have an opener that's working really well, I'll put it here if I get some good feedback. http://www.okcupid.com/profile/darkstar1731 |
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| Author: | Max DHV [ Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:33 am ] |
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Yeah its a cool page - but your emails need to be congruant with it too. If they are Id say you have A game, if not you'll get knowhere. |
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| Author: | darkstar1731 [ Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:52 pm ] |
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2 Openers I've came up with today, try them out and tell me if there getting you responses. 1. I can't figure out if I'm not as hot as I think I am or so hot that girls don't think they have a chance and don't messege me. Tell me what you think, be brutally honest. 2. I know, I know, I'm way too hot for you. Your scared to message me because you don't think you have a chance. But it couldn't hurt to try. Tell me a joke or something interesting about yourself. I'm willing to give you a shot. The first one got two almost instant responses, both very positive. |
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| Author: | ix. [ Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:55 pm ] |
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Interesting concept. I can see how this could work well on people you can see have viewed your profile first. "I see you looked at my profile, thought I was too hot for you and left...." The first one seems like a massive DLV: "Girls never message me" The second one, to me, is far too aggressive. By all means try it out, but I think most girls would be put off by you giving them orders in an opening message. |
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| Author: | darkstar1731 [ Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:06 pm ] |
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Maybe your right about both, but one of the girls who replied to the first one did seem to agree: "I think girls are probably just intimidated by your looks!  So, I can't figure out if the reason I get so many messages is that I'm hotter than I think I am, or that I'm not hot at all so guys feel I'm harmless. " I meant the second to be cocky/playful, but I can see it coming across as aggressive. |
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| Author: | Itoprocess [ Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:58 am ] |
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You should change "Your" to "You're" near the bottom. Bad grammer is a DLV. Otherwise looks good, your pictures are good picks. |
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