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| Author: | McGruv [ Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | OKCupid Profile Critique Needed |
Can a PUA out there tell me what's wrong with my profile? My response rate is kinda low. Thanks! username:blazini67 (site won't allow me to link yet) |
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| Author: | Snarg [ Wed Jun 29, 2011 3:24 am ] |
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The first paragraph is a bit of a chore to read. It doesn't reveal any information about yourself, nor does it build your perceived value. The second paragraph is way too generic. I have all the qualities you listed. Everyone does. You say you want to get into stand-up. Therefore, I would expect you to be funny throughout the profile. Don't be afraid to crack jokes as often as you can, just don't try too hard. Also, work on the generic-ness of your overall profile. There's really not a whole lot in there that makes you stand out from everyone else. For example, the six things you can't do without: "Friends, family, air, water, food, & shelter." I haven't met anyone who can't do without air, water, food or shelter. |
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