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Author:  sheps [ Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:02 pm ]
Post subject:  POF about me
how does this sound?

I'm a single, fun, active guy in N.London, i'm not the kind of person who really cares what music you listen too because i'll listen to anything decent but no EMOs, in fact lets change this up a little, lets talk about you. You're going to need a good sense of humour and decent personality if you don't have those things AND a cracking bum do not apply. If you're under a solid 7.5, do not apply. If you cant cook at least better then me do not apply (it would never work out we'd starve). If you cant hold a decent conversation, do not apply. I'm picky as hell and if you're not perfect i'm just going to move on, next.
+1 point on your hotness rating if ''u dnt ryte lyk diss'' congrats you were an 8 and now you're a 9, well done.

I want someone who's up for a movie night at home as much as going out for dinner or a night out on the town, you gotta be socially versatile girl!

No cat-ladies, im allergic!

Thanks guys
Author:  sheps [ Wed Jun 22, 2011 10:51 pm ]
Post subject: 
Changed it abit i'd love some feed back. thanks!

"I'm a single, fun, active guy in N.London. Just got out of a 2yr long relationship so looking to date. Aaaaand I think i'm going to change it up a little now, lets talk about you.
You must have a good sense of humour and decent personality if you don't have those things do not apply, although a cracking bum will help your cause. If you cant cook at least better then me, it would never work out we'd starve. If you cant hold a decent conversation, then afsdkljfaslfdslfsal. I'm pretty picky, i like quality people who know who they are, if you're not one of them... well you can guess.

extra points if ''u dnt ryte lyk diss''

I want someone who's up for watching a movie at home as much as going out for dinner or a night out on the town, a socially versatile girl!

If you couldn't tell my profile is all in good fun and i don't take myself too seriously then this marriage might not work out, im sorry its not me its you. But if you saw the humour we'll definitely get on :)"
Author:  vicparkguy83 [ Thu Jun 23, 2011 8:19 am ]
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Quote:
Changed it abit i'd love some feed back. thanks!

"I'm a single, fun, active guy in N.London. Just got out of a 2yr long relationship so looking to date. Aaaaand I think i'm going to change it up a little now, lets talk about you.
You must have a good sense of humour and decent personality if you don't have those things do not apply, although a cracking bum will help your cause. If you cant cook at least better then me, it would never work out we'd starve. If you cant hold a decent conversation, then afsdkljfaslfdslfsal. I'm pretty picky, i like quality people who know who they are, if you're not one of them... well you can guess.

extra points if ''u dnt ryte lyk diss''

I want someone who's up for watching a movie at home as much as going out for dinner or a night out on the town, a socially versatile girl!

If you couldn't tell my profile is all in good fun and i don't take myself too seriously then this marriage might not work out, im sorry its not me its you. But if you saw the humour we'll definitely get on :)"
I been online sarging for a year and learnt a lot. Your profile is actually pretty good I reckon, just some minor things you should change.

- Most chicks will only read the first sentence of a guys profile, so it really has to GRAB their attention. Yours is a pretty run of the mill opener.
- Take out you just got out of a relationship. I know you might be doing a bit of DHV there but chicks will just see that as an annoying huddle they couldn't be bothered to jump, especially when they have huge list of guys trying to contact them on their screen.
- It's good you put what you're looking for in there, but it's a bit of a list, maybe halve it. Definitely take out the conversation bit, chicks who've online dated a bit will read this as "the other girls on here don't talk to me"

Other than that, not a bad effort mate!
Author:  sheps [ Thu Jun 23, 2011 9:08 am ]
Post subject: 
changed the first part

"WOW! You must have really good luck to find my page! Feel free to keep reading, now, where did i put my shining armour?
I think i'm going to change it up a little though and talk about you.
You must have a good sense of humour and decent personality if you don't have those things do not apply, although a cracking bum will help your cause." etc the rest is unchanged

thanks for the help mate
Author:  vicparkguy83 [ Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:23 am ]
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Quote:
changed the first part

"WOW! You must have really good luck to find my page! Feel free to keep reading, now, where did i put my shining armour?
I think i'm going to change it up a little though and talk about you.
You must have a good sense of humour and decent personality if you don't have those things do not apply, although a cracking bum will help your cause." etc the rest is unchanged

thanks for the help mate
Haha good opener!
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