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Author:  the_real_d.skillz [ Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:12 am ]
Post subject:  Please review my POF profile

Can you guys/gals here on the forums look at my profile and give me any advice to help me get more attention from the ladies?

Maybe you can tell what worked for you on your profile.

Thank you in advance for your help :)

I can't post a link of my profile in the forum. My profile ID on Plenty of Fish is 21714632

Author:  Mig [ Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:52 am ]
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Eh. Needs work. It reads as if you're trying hard.

Check out Nigey's profile that I helped him out with: http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=25500934

Good mix of humor, the "I don't care" attitude, and the DHV's. Also, you could do with less photos and just the best ones.

Author:  GKS [ Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:53 am ]
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Why does it sound like one of those commercial on TV for new product? Reading your profile, I have a feeling that you're trying really hard to qualify in order to sell yourself. Be more PLAYFUL, take yourself less serious.
Second thing I want to point out is your pictures, too many picture of you BY YOURSELF. One or two in cool venue background is enough, and if you gonna post pic with girls, choose those that you're having fun with hot girls. I would only keep the vegas, visa and dj one.

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