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| Author: | Jambi [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:18 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my P.O.F profile |
http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... RSH!!! lol Search Bassist88 not sure if link is working |
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| Author: | Mig [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 3:19 am ] |
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From what I read, I liked...that being said...it's far too long. You know funny, you know what's DHV, you just need to trim it up A LOT. If I don't want to read it all, neither does a girl who just happens to click on your profile. Leave some stuff for a girl to ask about and to find out about you later on. Great job with the quality of the content though mate. |
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| Author: | Jambi [ Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:03 am ] |
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Yeah I pretty much know that its too long but I get a lot of messages just saying that. Like 'wow you don't half know what you want with the long profile' So its kind of them playing with me and it sets it nicely for me to give back a bit of banter. So not the end of the world. Despite this do you have ideas for which should be cropped out and what should stay? I need help with cropping because I really like everything that's in there and if I'm going to shorten it (which I agree needs to be done) may aswell keep the best bits and chuck the least effective. Cheers |
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