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Author:  skypirate35 [ Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:47 am ]
Post subject:  "less is more" profile
It's all to easy to write too much in a profile and effectively shoot yourself in the foot. One of the hardest things with profiles is knowing what girls will do under the "right" circumstances. Not sure where I robbed (parts of) this profile from, Maybe I saw it on someone's here. Not taking credit for writing it but I've been testing it for a while on pof. Prob the pic helps too. it gets quite a lot of unsolicited messages and views from decent looking girls. Based on that I'd say you have a better chance of responses assuming you write girls who like similar things.
Quote:
intent: wants to date but nothing serious

interests: travelling,sports,camping,thunder, reading,chatting,computers

I’ve got a great sense of humour. I’m a very well liked respectable kind of guy. I like camping and fishing and I like to travel and snowboard. I’m enjoying the new career path I’ve just begun, and living here kinda rocks right now! I love meeting new people but I’m not looking to become someone’s serious boy toy … so let’s just hangout and see what’s wut.

P.S. If you’re too shy to say hello, then ask one of your friends to pass me a note that says “My friend likes you… do you like her too? Circle Yes or No”

first date: Getting to know each other


notes
-change camping, fishing, snowboarding for appropriate things
-change "living here" for "living in (your town)"
-note the general minimalism
-note nothing said about what sort of girl is being sought, like attracts like is implied
-Pic wise, just have 1 but it better be a good one! Prob something congruent with the specifics. crop yourself in a holiday pic. Smiling. You can get around topless photos getting banned by cropping yourself just below the shoulders before you upload.
-note statements that convey you "get it" regarding the process of meeting/dating
Author:  chazman0426 [ Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:33 am ]
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That sounds like good advice, what should the headline be?
Author:  MoroccanSpice [ Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:23 pm ]
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USED, let's see where it goes :)
Author:  skypirate35 [ Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:58 pm ]
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Quote:
That sounds like good advice, what should the headline be?
I just had "hey lets chat"


It occurs to me it's difficult to separate the effect of the picture from the effect of the profile. I've set myself up with the profile with my own picture in a different country. see how that compares.
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