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Author:  anurizm [ Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:28 am ]
Post subject:  my dating application, some of you may find a great laugh

I'm a southern gent who is done with dirty girls. I draw and play guitar like it's a heroine addiction. My other interest are concerts, reading, traveling, and watching movies. I'm not a party animal, but going out for a drink every now and then is enjoyable. I do not do drugs period nor 420, but I have no problem if you choose to 420 other than that check in at a rehab because your probably going to look like Jack Palance's face before your 30.

I want a girl who is down to earth and with some class. If you are a bombshell who is absorbed in yourself you need not apply. I don't want a girl who barks out demands, demand belongs at the stock market. NO BBW! You need to have a descent frame looks aren't everything, but attraction is where it all starts. Artsy/nerdy/cute girls who are into music that involves an instrument major plus. The hop scotch dance music is unacceptable, MC Hammer's era is over. You must support yourself and have a job or a trust fund for all I care, I'm not paying your bills. NO KIDS ready made families are not for me and I don't want kids at the moment, maybe way later on if you prove yourself worthy. If you are not emotionally stable seek help! and do not contact me. When replying tell me what some of your interests are and goals, if you can't you will be spending the rest of your life reading your cosmo magazines waiting on a reply from me.

Author:  minsok [ Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:22 pm ]
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Not so good. You describe your interests in a list fashion and lists communicate a lot of info, but are boring. You'd be better off with less info and actually EXCITING the reader. How to do this? Fuck if I know. You also come off as a woman hater. "I don't like this, this or this about women. Don't do this, don't look like this, don't enjoy this." Focus on what you DO want and deserve, not what you're eliminating. I can be a misogynist sometimes and even I think you're a douche. A wise woman told me that a girl is much more likely to be attracted to a man if he appreciates her right out the gate. Do that. Be a lover of women.

Also, I'm in a negative mood, so take what I say with a grain of salt.

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