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Author:  Phazzle [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:53 am ]
Post subject:  Profile Critique
Hey all. Have had varying success with this profile but I would appreciate a fresh set of eyes. Please let me know if you have any suggestions that can help me raise my online game.

Thanks!

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/Demazranez
Author:  "B" [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:08 am ]
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Phazzle, the link only takes you to your own profile if you're logged in or it takes you to the home page, not to YOUR actual profile. If you figure this out, I'll look it over
:)
Author:  Phazzle [ Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:23 am ]
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Grrr...technology. That link should be good now. If it's not just search demazranez. I am the only one.

Thanks.
Author:  Phazzle [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:52 pm ]
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bump
Author:  The Web Womanizer [ Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:38 pm ]
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I wouldn't say it is bad per-say, it is just that it is a bit conventional. It describes you well, but that isn't the point. You WANT to build mystery and intrigue. You WANT to make them laugh. You WANT to make them angry. You WANT to make them wet. Not just talk about you.

Look at my profile:

Go to plenty of fish. Then search for 100%TooHottoHandle.

Now, what do you get from that?

In the last week I have gotten over 400 emails (closer to 600-700 but POF only holds 40 pages of 10) and 30-40 phone numbers. I won't date all of these girls but I needed to see how far I could push it. The written profile, pictures, and openers all build the attraction to hook the girl. Everything after that is pure game.

PM me with any questions.
Author:  DaveLate [ Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:20 pm ]
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Quote:

Look at my profile:

Go to plenty of fish. Then search for 100%TooHottoHandle.
I can't find your profile for some reason... would you mind providing a link or a quick snapshot of its content ?

Thanks!
Author:  maria_ [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:39 pm ]
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Nice photo :)

but I was too lazy to read the rest ^_^
Author:  The Web Womanizer [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:59 am ]
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Quote:
Quote:

Look at my profile:

Go to plenty of fish. Then search for 100%TooHottoHandle.
I can't find your profile for some reason... would you mind providing a link or a quick snapshot of its content ?

Thanks!
This site won't let me post links for some reason. Here it is:

www (dot) plentyoffish (dot) com (forward slash) viewprofile (dot) aspx?profile_id=20071185
Author:  krakow [ Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:52 pm ]
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Here is the URL

hZZp://ZZZ.plentyoffish.ZZZ/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=20071185

You're making me nervous The Web Womanizer with your snazzy fashion sense. :wink:
Author:  Pork Sausage [ Mon Oct 11, 2010 9:52 pm ]
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Quote:
I wouldn't say it is bad per-say, it is just that it is a bit conventional. It describes you well, but that isn't the point. You WANT to build mystery and intrigue. You WANT to make them laugh. You WANT to make them angry. You WANT to make them wet. Not just talk about you.

Look at my profile:

Go to plenty of fish. Then search for 100%TooHottoHandle.

Now, what do you get from that?

In the last week I have gotten over 400 emails (closer to 600-700 but POF only holds 40 pages of 10) and 30-40 phone numbers. I won't date all of these girls but I needed to see how far I could push it. The written profile, pictures, and openers all build the attraction to hook the girl. Everything after that is pure game.

PM me with any questions.
Wow.....just wow.
I thought I learned and used the things that I have been taught, but your profile has opened my eyes. Thank you sir.
Author:  rystar [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:11 am ]
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How come I can't see your profile then? I tried typing it in and everything?
Author:  Dragula [ Fri Dec 24, 2010 7:06 pm ]
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i also would like to see the link

i just cant seem to find it im very intrigued
Author:  zendog78 [ Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:19 pm ]
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Yeah come on...
Author:  skypirate35 [ Sun Dec 26, 2010 5:20 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile Critique
Quote:
Hey all. Have had varying success with this profile but I would appreciate a fresh set of eyes. Please let me know if you have any suggestions that can help me raise my online game.

Thanks!

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/Demazranez
it's kind of meh, a cross between overly-nerdy & trying too hard. I expect varying success is because of that. If they're not into movies there's not a lot there to interest/intrigue them. too much fact tends to be sub-optimal.

I'd definitely loose that you should message me if. You're in dangerous territory with statements like that. Anyone that needs to say that kind of stuff is basically implying they've experienced it which implies bad judgement or dubious standards.

You could probably do more over broadcasting. thought about it means nothing.

Your 2 pictures look like 2 different people.

check out supposedly julian assange's okc profile: http://www.okcupid.com/profile/HarryHarrison
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