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| Author: | toho.fuhai [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:04 pm ] |
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Hey guys, I've been on this dating site for a while, with little to no success on getting email responses back. I'm thinking its my profile. It may be AFC-rific. Can you guys let me know. I'm not asking for you to change it, I'll make teh adjustments myself but I figured the community would be best to ask. if you're interested, I'll PM you the link. I don't want to go posting links on the forum all crazy like |
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| Author: | minsok [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:30 am ] |
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Just post the link. Worst that happens is you start getting eye-raped by guys from all over the world forever. Who cares. Or are you worried about losing your anonymity on here? |
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:52 am ] |
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Just post the link, I've posted my profile here before and the only thing that happens is your visitors page gets filled by a bunch of guys, you'll probably get some good feedback out of it though. |
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| Author: | toho.fuhai [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:50 am ] |
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ok here's the link: I changed it a little and I sent a few AFC emails out to HB9's already. Totally shooting int he dark here, but I saw a kick ass email from a guy on here named Hobbit, so I'll start changing up how I write to the girls. http://www.okcupid.com/profile/bmanguru |
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| Author: | minsok [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:26 am ] |
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Some things that come to mind. Reduce your pictures to 3. Then cycle them out every month or so. I'd say lose the one with the kid because people will assume it's yours despite the caption and a man with a kid already is a mark against you. Put your job field in the section because leaving it blank makes you look unemployed and saying you like Ramen makes it look like you don't get paid much and don't take the time to take care of your body, both DLV. I know you copy and pasted the last part, so I can't say if it's good or not, but don't bother with women without photos AT ALL. They are hiding something and you're too good for that. What are some things you like to do, what are you good at? Why the hell are you on there, what are you looking for? You can see my style, I use the same screen name as here. Online, you are always making a sale, be to the point, efficient, then bail out. And bleach your hair bronze, it feel good. |
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| Author: | toho.fuhai [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:25 pm ] |
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thanks, i'll briefly glanced at your profile,I'm going to revamp mine this weekend. |
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| Author: | toho.fuhai [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 12:29 pm ] |
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Hey guys I updated my profile... can someone check it out and let me know if its a bit more solid? |
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| Author: | Phazzle [ Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:06 pm ] |
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Hey man. I am from Pittsburgh so I dont know if I should be giving you advice but in the spirit of PUA brotherhood I will make an exception, at least you have the good taste not to be from Cleveland. Anyway, I like your profile. It seems very casual and laid back, not like you put too much time into it (though I am sure you did). You might want to consider lengthening certain sections. Just look at Misok's Self summary. It is fun to read and each paragraph is a DHV, usually with a joke mixed in.It needs to be a compelling story. I agree that you need to have something in the Job section. If you are unemployed just put student. We are all students of the world here right? I, personally, am a fan of putting something in for your income. If you have no income then just pick the lowest amount. I mean you have to survive somehow. No job no income is a DLV and it is better to have some job and some income even if it is modest. The "first thing people notice," section is one of the most powerful opportunities to DHV. Do you have something more unconventional than "smile a lot?" That's not bad but try and find something that few, if any, people are using or something funny. For instance, mine is "My speaking voice," and I reference that I am a salesman who is going into broadcasting. I feel that it subconsciously gets her eager to hear my voice and as a result I end up getting a bunch of girls on the phone (MSG to date ratio is about 15%). I love your "Most private thing," it is an opportunity to make yourself look sensitive despite your rough manly exterior. Mine is "I cried when bambi's mother died," chicks eat that like tic tacs. Finally, consider something more general for the "you should message me..." Specifically saying that you are looking for girls makes you look predatory. If you say something like "You are a stimulating, intelligent person...no bubbleheads," you appear more selective and social. Hope this helps. Have a ball! |
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| Author: | Eric Lercara [ Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:09 am ] |
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You have loads of potential man. You should be cleaning up on OKcupid like you're Mary Poppins on crack. |
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| Author: | toho.fuhai [ Mon Nov 01, 2010 3:20 pm ] |
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hey guys it's been a while. thanks for all your input. I've been having a bit more success now with replies! |
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