It seems okay, I just think it leaves too much to her in a way.
You compliment her, which is fine I think, but at the same time I'm sure she knows she's pretty. And of course everyone wants to know her, she probably gets them all the time. You need to make sure it's YOU she wants to meet. You need to DHV and make her interested in meeting you.
Also letting her see your profile right away could come off as a little desperate. Make her work to see your profile
. It's like saying hey, I'm cool! Please check me out. As mystery says, a rich man doesn't need to tell you he's rich. Let her prove herself to you why she's worth getting to know.
I like jazestix's openers, they challenge her to prove herself to you.
EDIT: Also, saying that you won't pee yourself when you date, presupposes that you want to date her, and that could put pressure on her when she may not be looking to date. Plus, it gives her an inherent sense that you're looking something in return, which could really turn her off.