http://www.myspace.com/ijustwasted30minutes
I'm pretty happy with it; might put off some girls who don't roll like a rock star though
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| Author: | PatrickLH [ Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Constructive Criticism on the profile, thanks :P |
http://www.myspace.com/ijustwasted30minutes I'm pretty happy with it; might put off some girls who don't roll like a rock star though
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| Author: | skypirate1965 [ Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:34 am ] |
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Hi Patrick, well you've got balls to post a link to your profile. Ok first impression - Get new photos done. The main one is washed out and I think it's a bit of a bad image you're conveying if people can see that you've taken a picture of yourself in a mirror. I'm male and my first thought is - Doesn't the guy have friends to take a picture of him? The 3rd one with you in a cap is the best on the front page. Get some more done of you playing guitar and on your board (an action shot) Cannot think of anything else - maybe ditch the quote Anyway just my opinion good luck |
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| Author: | spinstill [ Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:52 am ] |
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most respectable girls aren't into drugs, if you do drugs thats cool don't advertise it though |
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