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| Author: | ChuMp [ Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Harshly Direct. |
Wow, seems like forever since I last posted. Well, I had a quick question about a simple online situation I'm in. I've sent a couple messages so far along the lines of: "Wow *something about pictures*, but you're profile's a little skimpy on the details/lacking some oomph eh? Or is that all there is to know?" It's direct I think, but I find it sounds a little harsh for me. I wanna keep it light and maybe a little teasing. How does it sound? So far no responses. |
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| Author: | jurupa [ Sat Jun 27, 2009 4:26 am ] |
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That to me sounds a bit insulting as it is a bit harsh and a tad rude because of it. As well as not very direct. I would say maybe: "Your pretty attractive in your pictures, but your profile is a bit light on who you are. Unless this is all there is to know about you? |
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| Author: | ChuMp [ Sat Jun 27, 2009 5:18 am ] |
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Hahaha, knew it sounded a bit off, thanks. |
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| Author: | jurupa [ Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:59 am ] |
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Your welcome. I actually like the line myself and going to see how well it works on the short profiles I run into on dating sites. |
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