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| Author: | HaVoC11B [ Fri May 01, 2009 2:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Is this a good "about me" profile |
I just updated my profile. Need opinion on my about me I am currently living life to the fullest. Anything life throws at me i take full atvantage. I enjoy hanging out where there is alot of people so i can make new friends. I always have a smile on my face. I work out every day and enjoy being in better shape than most other guys. I have alot of goals for my life (completed a few and still working on them) I am looking for a girl who can keep up with me. she needs to be loyal, passionate, nice, ambitious, and love life. |
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| Author: | jurupa [ Fri May 01, 2009 8:25 am ] |
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All your profile said to me was "Hi I am a guy and I want to meet girls to go out with and maybe hook up with". It was too short and boring. It said nothing about you let alone anything that will separate you from the other guys out there. Put more personality into it as well as make it more exciting. |
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| Author: | HaVoC11B [ Fri May 01, 2009 1:00 pm ] |
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ok thanks but can you give me some examples to go off of. so i can personalize them and change my profile. HaVoC |
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| Author: | kanaansea [ Fri May 01, 2009 2:23 pm ] |
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Best one I have ever read. I have used it before as well. Comments/Messages and interest day in and day out. Works like gold, tried and true. "Do you think you would look good next to me? Only talk to me if you know how to have fun and love to party. Must look like a model but treat me like an ugly girl would. I tend to be selfish and completely full of myself." You cannot look like every other guy out there. Set yourself apart! Be different. You'll stand out with this and not seem like that loser looking to find a girl and get laid. |
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| Author: | Drift. [ Mon May 04, 2009 6:20 pm ] |
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Quote: Best one I have ever read. I have used it before as well. Comments/Messages and interest day in and day out. Works like gold, tried and true.
that just makes you sound like you're way into yourself and obv. most girls dont like that
"Do you think you would look good next to me? Only talk to me if you know how to have fun and love to party. Must look like a model but treat me like an ugly girl would. I tend to be selfish and completely full of myself." You cannot look like every other guy out there. Set yourself apart! Be different. You'll stand out with this and not seem like that loser looking to find a girl and get laid. |
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| Author: | kanaansea [ Mon May 04, 2009 7:24 pm ] |
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Not remotely true at all. I consistently hundreds of times got - "I'd look good next to you" or something to that effect. It does work. |
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| Author: | nightrider767 [ Wed May 06, 2009 4:32 am ] |
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Quote: Bigging yourself up lowers your value. If you're funny, say something funny. If you're cool, be cool. Saying you are X and Y (where X and Y are personality traits) appears try-hard.
Now considering the above, compare what you wrote with kanaansea's remark. Big difference. raised by wolves Here's something else to consider. I think it would be hard for anyone of us to give you more exact tips, because from reading your profile, it's hard to see what you are about, outside of being an ok guy. But dude, you are right on track working this shit out. So keep it up. You'll get it. Maybe look at other guys profiles for ideas. Don't be afraid to steel bits and pieces... Thanks kanaansea, that was slick! |
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