PUA Forum :: Need someone to mentor me.. This is getting ridiculous

"my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard

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"my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard

Really? That's what a mPUA gave to me. Is it really? 2nd opinion pls!

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"my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard

Really? That's what a mPUA gave to me. Is it really? 2nd opinion pls!

For the 1st one, we looking better now?

First off for me at least all of those little lines moving about behind the text is annoying. Its not as bad as the seizure like flashing colors on other profiles tho. But still annoying never the less as it distracts my eye from reading your profile.

Secondly where are your comments and friends? A girl may think you have neither if she was to stumble upon your page which is not a good thing as MySpace is a social website and with that lack of social proof it can hurt you. I can understand if you don't want people to see them, but it really helps you with social proof and since you are having trouble with getting girls to write back, you may want to have them out for display.

You may also want to make your about me a bit more longer and in depth but at least make it come off as you spend a bit more time on it than you did. As it looks like no real thought went into it and I really go no sense of who you are from reading it. You may also want to list specific things in your interests area than to talk about them. As I found girls get a better sense of who you are when you mention specific things you are into. And they are more likely to take an interest in you as you show them what your interested are.

And why the heck do you have a domain name? I know you are an actor and I am sure for business use it make things easier, but it may come off as egoistical to girls.

Lastly what are you saying to these girls. Because I have a feeling that it may also be your openers that cause girls not to respond.

I have a great profile but yet the hot girls on myspace don't write me back!

from experience, myspace and facebook are a waste of time when meeting random women, its a social networking site ie friends talking to friends.....get on a dating site, women there are actively seeking out men, not mates

your profile might need work but i would say 90% of the problem is the sites your using

Na, myspace is great I think. One just needs to know how to use it right.

Author:	SocietyofCool [ Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:55 am ]
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I have a great profile but yet the hot girls on myspace don't write me back! I'm getting so annoyed. www.jarettjaycasesa.com or http://www.myspace.com/jarettjayofficial i use both that's my myspace. Can someone help me who knows what thye are doing? Mungojerry?

Author:	Daishi [ Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:05 am ]
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Maybe if you were a little bit less toxic. I had to say it haha.

Author:	smartass [ Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:49 am ]
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You need to DHV without sounding like you're bragging. Really, none of your photos need captions. If you put up pics where you are surrounded by beautiful women, they get it. There's no need to say things like "getting mischievous with amy" or whatever... Also, pics of women by themselves may be a DLV if you're not in them. Seems kind of "stalker-y"... 2nd - don't goof around with the height/weight attributes. Especially if you're tall and not fat! Chicks do look at those a LOT. That's all I got, so if you're still not getting responses, it's probably what you're saying!

Author:	Mungojerry [ Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:48 pm ]
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Check your PM! haha You should have stuck with the profile we did a year ago!

Author:	Agent Whore 32 [ Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:24 pm ]
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"my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard

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Author:	SocietyofCool [ Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:05 am ]
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Quote: "my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard Really? That's what a mPUA gave to me. Is it really? 2nd opinion pls! And btw what would you suggest then?

Author:	SocietyofCool [ Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:20 am ]
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Quote: Quote: Quote: "my devil-may care attitude is what girls ..." hhaaah, take that out, cmon you know thats bragging, needy and try hard Really? That's what a mPUA gave to me. Is it really? 2nd opinion pls! For the 1st one, we looking better now? Aw man that wasn't my thing though. Don't say the one I have now aint that good cause a lot of people like it, it's probably just my msging style that's getting me.

Author:	jurupa [ Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:30 am ]
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First off for me at least all of those little lines moving about behind the text is annoying. Its not as bad as the seizure like flashing colors on other profiles tho. But still annoying never the less as it distracts my eye from reading your profile. Secondly where are your comments and friends? A girl may think you have neither if she was to stumble upon your page which is not a good thing as MySpace is a social website and with that lack of social proof it can hurt you. I can understand if you don't want people to see them, but it really helps you with social proof and since you are having trouble with getting girls to write back, you may want to have them out for display. You may also want to make your about me a bit more longer and in depth but at least make it come off as you spend a bit more time on it than you did. As it looks like no real thought went into it and I really go no sense of who you are from reading it. You may also want to list specific things in your interests area than to talk about them. As I found girls get a better sense of who you are when you mention specific things you are into. And they are more likely to take an interest in you as you show them what your interested are. And why the heck do you have a domain name? I know you are an actor and I am sure for business use it make things easier, but it may come off as egoistical to girls. Lastly what are you saying to these girls. Because I have a feeling that it may also be your openers that cause girls not to respond.

Author:	SocietyofCool [ Thu Mar 05, 2009 4:19 pm ]
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Quote: First off for me at least all of those little lines moving about behind the text is annoying. Its not as bad as the seizure like flashing colors on other profiles tho. But still annoying never the less as it distracts my eye from reading your profile. Secondly where are your comments and friends? A girl may think you have neither if she was to stumble upon your page which is not a good thing as MySpace is a social website and with that lack of social proof it can hurt you. I can understand if you don't want people to see them, but it really helps you with social proof and since you are having trouble with getting girls to write back, you may want to have them out for display. You may also want to make your about me a bit more longer and in depth but at least make it come off as you spend a bit more time on it than you did. As it looks like no real thought went into it and I really go no sense of who you are from reading it. You may also want to list specific things in your interests area than to talk about them. As I found girls get a better sense of who you are when you mention specific things you are into. And they are more likely to take an interest in you as you show them what your interested are. And why the heck do you have a domain name? I know you are an actor and I am sure for business use it make things easier, but it may come off as egoistical to girls. Lastly what are you saying to these girls. Because I have a feeling that it may also be your openers that cause girls not to respond. 1. I have no idea how to fix that bro, sorry man but I think thats myspace for you. 2. My comments and friends? Well for profile 1 they are there. For profile 2, there are none cause I just opened it the other day. 3. I don't want to over qualify. This is a debatable one. I really have to see that I keep it short but informative. 4. THe girls will never know about the domain name but even if they do, so what. It's the last thing I'm concerned with. In part, thanks for your input and taking the time out of your day to help me out. I'm looking for a mentor though, I'm set with the profile criticism since I've already been through 1+ year of it. Right Mungo? haha

Author:	skypirate35 [ Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:49 pm ]
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Quote: I have a great profile but yet the hot girls on myspace don't write me back! aside from all the suggestions, maybe you've hit on something there. maybe it doesnt matter how "great" a profile is if there's no social proof. Since social proof serves to provide influence in ambiguous situations and profiles at base are notoriously lacking in credibility(ambiguous). therefore social proof provides credibility. maybe hot girls rely more on social proof. you should write some less hot girls just to see what happens.

Author:	wants10 [ Fri Mar 06, 2009 2:15 am ]
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from experience, myspace and facebook are a waste of time when meeting random women, its a social networking site ie friends talking to friends.....get on a dating site, women there are actively seeking out men, not mates your profile might need work but i would say 90% of the problem is the sites your using

Author:	SocietyofCool [ Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:57 am ]
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Quote: from experience, myspace and facebook are a waste of time when meeting random women, its a social networking site ie friends talking to friends.....get on a dating site, women there are actively seeking out men, not mates your profile might need work but i would say 90% of the problem is the sites your using Na, myspace is great I think. One just needs to know how to use it right.

Author:	wants10 [ Fri Mar 06, 2009 11:06 pm ]
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Na, myspace is great I think. One just needs to know how to use it right.[/quote] I dunno , i kinda disagree, with myspace you always seemed to put in 110% for very little return, with site i am using i am seeing two new girls everyweek. With myspace that kind of return wasnt possible for me.

Author:	SocietyofCool [ Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:46 am ]
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Quote: Na, myspace is great I think. One just needs to know how to use it right. I dunno , i kinda disagree, with myspace you always seemed to put in 110% for very little return, with site i am using i am seeing two new girls everyweek. With myspace that kind of return wasnt possible for me.[/quote] And what site are we speaking of

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