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Author:  Marlow [ Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:25 am ]
Post subject:  Need Critique on Facebook Dialogue

The following occured during the last couple weeks. We met at a buddies house hanging out, played video games and made her do a T-Rex impression, established some good comfort. Please give me blunt honest comments and suggestions, I mean tear this apart, and let me know how you feel.

November 2 at 7:40pm

ME:Even though you were really bad at mario, and your T-Rex
impression was sub-par at best, I had a great time hanging out with you. I think we should do it again sometime. I promise I'll limit my creepy phone calls and text messages to 25 per day. Deal?

November 2 at 7:41pm

HB:hahaha
ok, we are going to have to play it over again,
because i used to be good!
i really did...
lol
but sureeeee!


November 3 at 7:04pm

ME: Two really important questions, like life or death:

1) What is your favorite dinosaur?

2) Can you ice skate?


November 3 at 8:46pm

HB: favorite dinosaur...
probably a terridactyl (spell?) haha because your impression was so good!
and b.
umm. you know, not really sure about that one, i've tried a few times!


November 3 at 10:47pm
ME: lmaoooo the funniest thing just happened, i just looked up how to spell terridactyl, and this was the first thing that came up:

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.p ... erradactyl

was that why your favorite dinosaur was a terradactyl? lollercoaster.

Want to go ice skating this weekend? Only if you work on your T-Rex impression though ;)


November 4 at 9:55pm

HB:haha
you know my impression was great!
however, i won't be in town this weekend-- florida state :(

November 5 at 9:10pm
Cancel your plans. I'm much more fun than anything at state.

November 9 at 9:07pm

ME: Whats up doofus,

Tuesday night my friend is having a "getting hitched" party at gallaghers, and I thought I would invite someone who is pretty cool but i dont know that well. Morgan Freeman was buzy, but would you like to go?

November 9 at 9:44pm

HB: hii!
wellll.
what time is it at?
i unfortunately have to work until 1015ishhh...

November 9 at 11:15pm
it's from 8 to 2am, but I don't think I would stay that late.

ME: Considering I'm not online that much, can I have ur number? Everyone else I know is FAR too interesting, and I need to be bored from time to time.


November 9 at 11:18pm

HB: haha alrighttt
i'm really boring, just to warn.
212-xxx-xxxx

November 11 at 11:12pm

HB: sorry i missed your dinner--- work was super awesome, though.
way more fun than you...
raincheck?

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