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Author:  SirPounce [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 4:00 am ]
Post subject:  Need Feedback Gents
Looking for some feedback and thoughts on this brief interaction which I thought I handled very well.

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Me:

Ms. Stinky PJ's, (she said she LANS for 12 hours straight in her pajamas)

So, I'm thinking about robbing a bank, then heading down to the ocean and faking my own death. Scuba tanks are in the trunk, you in?

P.S. You should probably bring some sandwiches or something, no egg salad though...

Your partner in crime,
Jordan

Her:

excuse me my PJ's don't stink. mostly.

And this message feels like copy paste to like a million chicks, which makes me kinda not interested since I literally only date people who put in immense effort specifically for me. :L

Me:

You're a stranger, I don't want to date you. Messages like this help me discover a lot about people. I now know you're intuitive (you claimed to predict the end of movies, now I have reason to believe you). I know you have clear standards that you won't bend and I suspect you have those standards because in the past you didn't and you got burned for it. I also know you find me interesting, because even though your intuition told you I was a fake ass (and I can tell you don't take your intuition lightly) you still messaged me. And I'm glad for that message Ms. Stinky Ass Pajamas, because I like what it's shown me.

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Author:  JackZero [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 5:51 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Truthfully, you shouldn't have even responded. She disqualified you and spoke to you like you were beneath her. Women like that don't deserve your attention.
Author:  SirPounce [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Quote:
Truthfully, you shouldn't have even responded. She disqualified you and spoke to you like you were beneath her. Women like that don't deserve your attention.
Hmmmm, I did feel that Jack but at the same time she was a little playful with the Pajama part. "Don't stink, mostly"

Even so, what do you think of my response?
Author:  JackZero [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:47 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Quote:
Quote:
Truthfully, you shouldn't have even responded. She disqualified you and spoke to you like you were beneath her. Women like that don't deserve your attention.
Hmmmm, I did feel that Jack but at the same time she was a little playful with the Pajama part. "Don't stink, mostly"

Even so, what do you think of my response?
I saw the "Don't stink, mostly" part, but her overall message was basically trying to say that you weren't good enough. And even if you were good enough, it would only be because you put in "immense" effort.

I purposely didn't answer about your response and how good or bad it was. I think at best, it's an interesting response...but it bothers me that you wasted your time responding to someone with a shit attitude. It's just my opinion...so take it with a grain of salt.
Author:  Eddie Fews [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Lol

Well you did give me a good laugh. Anyway though.. Once you have to explain yourself its over. If you're going to copy and paste, go for clever one liners. A lot of guys are posting those mini paragraph one liners. Girls are getting hip to the game. Girls like it effortless.. Robbing banks and scuba tanks.. Thats just a little too complicated.

You'd been better off with.. " Thinking about robbing a bank.. You a rebel or nah? I could use a hand :P "

Shorter and sweeter..
Author:  billmincersucks [ Mon Jun 06, 2016 11:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Why are we talking to girls who LAN for 12 straight hours in their PJs. Sounds like a loser. Are guys that desperate?
Author:  SirPounce [ Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Quote:
Why are we talking to girls who LAN for 12 straight hours in their PJs. Sounds like a loser. Are guys that desperate?
I get the presumption, but she was pretty damn hot and she's a popular twitch streamer.
Author:  SirPounce [ Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:16 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Quote:
Lol

Well you did give me a good laugh. Anyway though.. Once you have to explain yourself its over. If you're going to copy and paste, go for clever one liners. A lot of guys are posting those mini paragraph one liners. Girls are getting hip to the game. Girls like it effortless.. Robbing banks and scuba tanks.. Thats just a little too complicated.

You'd been better off with.. " Thinking about robbing a bank.. You a rebel or nah? I could use a hand :P "

Shorter and sweeter..
As always thank you very much Eddie, it's a privilege to hear from ya and I will apply your advice eagerly. I wish I was wealthier, I'd hire you to follow me around. :lol:

Effortless, this is something I need to focus on.
Author:  SirPounce [ Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need Feedback Gents
Quote:
Quote:
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Truthfully, you shouldn't have even responded. She disqualified you and spoke to you like you were beneath her. Women like that don't deserve your attention.
Hmmmm, I did feel that Jack but at the same time she was a little playful with the Pajama part. "Don't stink, mostly"

Even so, what do you think of my response?
I saw the "Don't stink, mostly" part, but her overall message was basically trying to say that you weren't good enough. And even if you were good enough, it would only be because you put in "immense" effort.

I purposely didn't answer about your response and how good or bad it was. I think at best, it's an interesting response...but it bothers me that you wasted your time responding to someone with a shit attitude. It's just my opinion...so take it with a grain of salt.
Not at all, your advice is much appreciated and I take a grain of salt with every bite of knowledge I consume.

You're right she could have been just saying 'you're not good enough'. It may have had nothing to do with my message and more to do with my appearance or profile.

I suppose the reason I wasted my time with her was because I saw it as a challenge and an opportunity to experiment and explore.

At first I thought my response was genius, I didn't imagine it would result in more shitty attitude, but it did and we stopped talking 2 messages later.
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