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Author:  Appache [ Sat Jan 02, 2016 4:50 am ]
Post subject:  Need a online dating profile critique

I'm just out of a 6 year LTR and trying to get back into the game. Unfortunately most of my former wingmen are out of the game, and in a lot of ways i'm starting from scratch. Because I'm limited on time to go out currently I'm hedging my bets with online dating. I just signed up for a few dating sites (pof, OKC, Match.com, Tinder). getting minimal results. Currently working on getting some better photos, but could use a critique of the content.

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/BadMellonFarmer/

Author:  lonerx14 [ Wed Feb 03, 2016 3:25 am ]
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just put 6'0 for your height, (girls are funny because the depth perception is off for small details) keep your list dhv (so put things you do) for the ninja training put cross training and then say like future dates you could go and do some ninja training with your dates (perception of ninja training sounds inviting to hang out with you) Other than that, I posted some quick changes that will be a second to do.

Remember steel sharpens steel, and keep posting

Author:  Dm3Pua3 [ Thu Feb 04, 2016 1:04 am ]
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You should go through your grammar on the profile, try to be a little more non specific and more easily relatble.

Then again my profile sucks too but these are just a few things I'd think would be worth mentioning.

Author:  QueenOfDating [ Mon May 09, 2016 5:12 pm ]
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If I were you, I would change my pictures. Take new pictures and upload them as often as you can. Also, consider changing your profile if you notice that it does not work for you. Either re-write your profile or at least the parts which don't work. Don't think that your profile is static. :wink:


Queen of Dating
https://www.instagram.com/queenofdating/
Quote:
"Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead."
Oscar Wilde

Author:  Heywood Jablowme [ Mon May 09, 2016 7:02 pm ]
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If I were you, I would change my pictures. Take new pictures and upload them as often as you can. Also, consider changing your profile if you notice that it does not work for you. Either re-write your profile or at least the parts which don't work. Don't think that your profile is static. :wink:


Queen of Dating
https://www.instagram.com/queenofdating/
Quote:
"Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead."
Oscar Wilde
Hey Marla, coming over to boost sales?

Author:  n2thevoid [ Sun May 22, 2016 5:26 pm ]
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If I were you, I would change my pictures. Take new pictures and upload them as often as you can. Also, consider changing your profile if you notice that it does not work for you. Either re-write your profile or at least the parts which don't work. Don't think that your profile is static. :wink:


Queen of Dating
https://www.instagram.com/queenofdating/
Quote:
"Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead."
Oscar Wilde
Hey Marla, coming over to boost sales?
lol well done

Author:  Saintest [ Mon Jul 04, 2016 7:34 am ]
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Your profile is ok. There is nothing to change. Just wait)))

Author:  galist [ Tue Jul 05, 2016 2:18 am ]
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I'm just out of a 6 year LTR and trying to get back into the game. Unfortunately most of my former wingmen are out of the game, and in a lot of ways i'm starting from scratch. Because I'm limited on time to go out currently I'm hedging my bets with online dating. I just signed up for a few dating sites (pof, OKC, Match.com, Tinder). getting minimal results. Currently working on getting some better photos, but could use a critique of the content.

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/BadMellonFarmer/
those first two pics are questionable, and i think the 3rd look like you trying too hard.

the last pic looks like you got money to spend on them.

as for the profile, i cant help with that as i dont there's a one size fit all solution

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