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| Author: | kiss it you know you want [ Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | my space help |
guys help me out here ! advice things that are good things that are not ! i'm 43 and just trying to get game together including my space and on line ! be brutal if you have to come up with ideas to help me out here ! http://www.myspace.com/bournemouthalpha |
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| Author: | JSmooth [ Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:35 pm ] |
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I'll be happy to start. First of all, I like the way your profile looks, and how it captured my attention. Positives: +Main Picture, is you and two women, showing pre-selection (DHV) +Your background is fun and exciting! Got to love the Vegas Script. +The information you listed about yourself is good +Your pictures that you have are fun, and again show more pre-selection. +Being a country music fan I like the song on your profile. +Your top friends are all attractive women! +Same with the comments on your profile, most are attractive women. Negatives: -Your "About Me" Section is like a book, and it need to be shortened. -You could do some writing in your blog to further convey your personality, any topic that's close to you will work. Overall, I think you've done excellent work! |
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| Author: | kiss it you know you want [ Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | thanks for the thumbs up |
if you have ideas what bits to shorten then pass the info on |
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