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My profile is probably going to need a huge makeover, so I figured that I'd ask some of you guys to give me a hand with it. Thank you for any assitance you're able to give.

'm the reason there are no more rotating display cases at Shaw's Supermarkets.

According to many of my friends, I'm in a very positive way the definition of "looks can be deceiving."

My username is derived from the fact I survived six heart conditions as an infant. As a result, I've grabbed life by the horns and experience it as much as I possibly can.

Huge bibliophile (lover of books), scribophile (lover of writing), and cinephile (lover of movies), also pretty into music too.

When it comes to trivia or debates, that's my definite ace in the hole.

I can almost guarantee I don't have the same political views as you, but am very open to learning about other viewpoints, even if I may disagree with them. I'm very good at finding common ground.

I watch a lot of Law & Order, so I'm pretty much a lawyer.

Author:	ArtyW [ Mon Nov 24, 2014 12:59 am ]
Post subject:	Profile Review
My profile is probably going to need a huge makeover, so I figured that I'd ask some of you guys to give me a hand with it. Thank you for any assitance you're able to give. 'm the reason there are no more rotating display cases at Shaw's Supermarkets. According to many of my friends, I'm in a very positive way the definition of "looks can be deceiving." My username is derived from the fact I survived six heart conditions as an infant. As a result, I've grabbed life by the horns and experience it as much as I possibly can. Huge bibliophile (lover of books), scribophile (lover of writing), and cinephile (lover of movies), also pretty into music too. When it comes to trivia or debates, that's my definite ace in the hole. I can almost guarantee I don't have the same political views as you, but am very open to learning about other viewpoints, even if I may disagree with them. I'm very good at finding common ground. I watch a lot of Law & Order, so I'm pretty much a lawyer.

Author:	Warped Mindless [ Mon Nov 24, 2014 8:48 am ]
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99% of online game is your pictures. Worry about those and keep your profile text short and simple.

Author:	White Panda [ Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:43 pm ]
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I agree, photos are by far the most important to get her attention. There are tones of free tips on my blog if you’re interested. However, once you’ve got her attention, your description can ruin your chances if it turns her off. I’ve detected several things that could do just that. For instance: - You’re trying too hard to be quirky and original, without even really being funny. -Talking about your heart conditions is awful. Sounds like you’re playing the pity card. - Saying you’re sure you dont share the same political views makes you sound like you might be some sort of extremist (left or right wing). In dating, leave politics and religion out of it! - Explaining what bibliophile means (lover of books) sounds silly Overall, talk about what makes you passionate and the positive things that differentiate you from the pack (books and writing is good). Don’t talk about what she might think of you (“looks can be deceiving” “finding common ground”) and dont talk about anything that could alienate a % of the population unless that is your goal (politics...). Oh, and dont talk about Shaw’s supermarket. Happy Tindering!

Author:	DrewDating [ Sun Nov 30, 2014 10:13 pm ]
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Quote: My profile is probably going to need a huge makeover, so I figured that I'd ask some of you guys to give me a hand with it. Thank you for any assitance you're able to give. 'm the reason there are no more rotating display cases at Shaw's Supermarkets. According to many of my friends, I'm in a very positive way the definition of "looks can be deceiving." My username is derived from the fact I survived six heart conditions as an infant. As a result, I've grabbed life by the horns and experience it as much as I possibly can. Huge bibliophile (lover of books), scribophile (lover of writing), and cinephile (lover of movies), also pretty into music too. When it comes to trivia or debates, that's my definite ace in the hole. I can almost guarantee I don't have the same political views as you, but am very open to learning about other viewpoints, even if I may disagree with them. I'm very good at finding common ground. I watch a lot of Law & Order, so I'm pretty much a lawyer. for some reason people think it is all about the bio - its not and the above people are correct it is all about the pictures delete the bio

Author:	dlightmen [ Sun Nov 30, 2014 10:19 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Profile Review
I was goofing around once an posted pics of some buff, amateur model guy I found on Facebook. He was a fire fighter as well. The profile content was just a bunch of random keys I hit to fill it in. I sent messages ranging from a winky face, a simple "hello", to "Bent or spread? Spit or swallow?". The "spit or swallow / bent or spread" were just to HB 7 and less. Lots of 7's and "curvy" women replied with a phone number and "let's fuck.". Not really any cute women though. So I think content and a good message is pretty important as well.

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