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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Thu Apr 24, 2014 9:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Fishing Critique |
Good morning/afternoon/evening gentlemen. I just remade my POF account. I am wondering if I could get someone to critique and give me feed back. My UN is Hayeshaze91. If you can't find it, I'll post my statement about myself, and you can get a feel for me. Concerning the height joke on there, I'm actually 5'6 also lol. Fun guy with a fun sense of humor who likes to have fun. Yes, I do dance, and have been doing so for about 6 years. I do hip hop freestyle, but I could maybe be your personal stripper O.o. I go out sometimes, and if we ever do, don't be a wall flower. That's such a damn bore and turn off. Get out and get active! I'm 6'5 on a good day. I tell Men's Warehouse "they're gonna like they way they look". My cuddling is far from mediocre. I'm secretly a world class masseuse. And I always wake up on the right side of the bed. Concerning passion, it has to be with animals. Yes I will be a veterinarian. No I cannot give you veterinary service discounts under the table, haha. College's pay me tuition. I once took care of Rihanna's pet chihuahua. K. Michelle's black Labrador retriever was cooler though. I like medium sized dogs better. I don't ask for too much in a woman. Just be yourself. If you like a lot food, then I'm your chef. Americas Top Chef got tips from me. If you like sexual topics, I'm your nasty man. Playgirl wanted me on the set, I had to turn them down though. Don't let the views of society dictate your thoughts and expression. So if you have the even the slightest thought of "man, I think I should probably hang out with this guy" chances are I will be thinking the same thing about you. So take your awesome self to your mailbox email me! It'll be your pleasure. Let's have a good time. Ps. Not sure why I didn't think of this. Here's the link lol: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=73539477 |
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| Author: | Apples185 [ Fri Apr 25, 2014 2:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
I like your headline. You should put up more photos, maybe 10 more at least, and don't have yourself too far from the camera. |
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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Wed Apr 30, 2014 3:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
Appreciate the comments sir! I see I'm racking up a few views here and there. I'd appreciate more comments/feedback instead of "empty visits" lol |
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| Author: | CharlesFinley [ Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
Couple critiques - (and it's for the purposes of helping you - please take them as constructive, and not insulting): - Overall it's really not bad, firstly.... - More pics, and better quality. Some are so grainy you can't even tell what you're looking at. - Get rid of the pointless shirtless pic. Nobody cares. - The vet pics and ones with animals are great! Seriously - more of those (puppies, dude... puppies). - As for your write-up, it's not bad. I personally don't like the 'ha ha's' in it. The men's wearhouse line is a bit much also. - Split into paragraphs. Easier to read. |
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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Thu May 01, 2014 1:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
^ now that's what I'm talking about! Appreciate that sir. |
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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Thu May 08, 2014 2:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
I know more people than CharlesFinley and Apples have some advice lol. |
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| Author: | alxbkr [ Tue May 13, 2014 4:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
Honestly the first picture looks weird as hell. |
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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Wed May 14, 2014 4:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
Lol it's just to show off my pants, something most haven't seen. I get a lot of compliments in person due to how different they are. "Peacocking" if you will lol. Anything else? |
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| Author: | Ehayes91 [ Thu Jun 05, 2014 10:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Fishing Critique |
Can I get a few more critiques please? |
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