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Author:  stringfellow on sticks [ Mon Apr 21, 2014 9:49 am ]
Post subject:  Critique my profiles?

Hey guys,

Could you please tell me what you think of my OK Cupid & POF profiles, and how I might improve them?

Thanks!

http://www.okcupid.com/profile


http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=31823854

Author:  BradHoliday [ Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:44 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Critique my profiles?

Hey man,

Okcupid link is broken.

Theres a lot going on here... If you want I can make you a video detailing specifics. PM me and we can talk for sure.

Heres a few quick ideas:

1. Get better pics; your pics communicate that you are potentially a bit uncomfortable with being in social situations or are really excited to have a picture taken.... Try to take some like this

Ones with girls lovin' on you
Ones with you looking really cool and 'fly'
Ones with you being the center of attention in a cool situation

2. Your profile is far too serious unless you are looking for a serious relationship off the bat.
If you are looking for more casual sex I would recommend having more fun and being 'lighter'

-Brad

Author:  stringfellow on sticks [ Tue Apr 22, 2014 11:41 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Critique my profiles?

Thanks Brad, your help is much appreciated!

I'll get to work on improving things!

Author:  stringfellow on sticks [ Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Critique my profiles?

Brad,

I tried to send you a PM, but I'm not sure if it worked. Did you get it?

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