Nope but I'll definitely be going to the animal shelter soon
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| Author: | Caine1337 [ Thu Apr 10, 2014 12:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my profile |
I need it at its best and I'm currently testing the profile pic. Give me some constructive feedback! http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=40551830 |
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| Author: | CharlesFinley [ Thu Apr 10, 2014 3:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my profile |
Profile pic seems cool to me. The pic with the two other girls seems a little obvious. I'm not a fan --- yay you met a couple chicks who said yes to a pic. So did every other guy on POF. Got a pic with a puppy? Swap the chicks for puppies and you're solid, buddy. |
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| Author: | Caine1337 [ Thu Apr 10, 2014 4:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my profile |
Nope but I'll definitely be going to the animal shelter soon
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| Author: | ChimeranPanda [ Thu Apr 10, 2014 4:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my profile |
The cool thing these days is to get pics with wild animals. Tigers, lions, monkeys. If you're ever in Thailand or some country that allows that. It might be too common by now but it's an idea. Overall on the profile i don't see any red flags. BTW I get the impression POF is pretty saturated but m@tch-com is like shooting fish in a barrel. |
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| Author: | Don Horneone [ Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my profile |
Quote: I'm a Computer Science student and kind of a nerd. I'm passionate about volunteering through various organizations on campus, specifically with children. I do part-time coding for MU and I'm also a superhero, no big deal. I'm very ambitious about all things in life (in case you were just so excited to read this you skipped the above section). My goal is to run my own software development company relatively soon after graduation. Traveling is awesome, if you don't agree, we probably won't get along. Chivalry is not dead so if you're one of those who has a fit about having the car door opened for you because you can "do it yourself" just stop. Be prepared for some sarcasm, I can't help it.
I would remove the following words/phrases:I firmly believe that happiness is a choice, not a result of external circumstances. "(in case you were just so excited to read this you skipped the above section)" "relatively" "if you don't agree, we probably won't get along" (I'd try writing something different about travel, express your passion a bit more and don't put anything negative in there) "firmly" I would re-write "Chivalry is not dead so if you're one of those who has a fit about having the car door opened for you because you can "do it yourself" just stop." Good sentiment but a bit confrontational. Rather than telling them off, be a bit more screening about it: "Chivalry is not dead so I'm not looking for one of those girls who has a fit about having the car door opened for them" |
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