lol that link wont work

I fixed the link I think. Tell me if it works

Redo the pics. Don't post two of the same pics that were obviously taken in the same "photo shoot", wearing the same clothes.

Personally, I get where you're going on dressing. I go for the "rocker" "grunge" look as well. You might want to tidy your look up just a little bit. I like the haircut. You might want to shave though.... That will make you look more polished... Also, looking at your pics, most will assume you don't do much of anything. Add a little variety.....


The written part is kind of generic and a little AFC... Look in this section of the forums for some good written material. Copy and paste it until you get an idea of what is good, then write your own.