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Author:  Joak [ Tue Oct 15, 2013 3:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Critique my game!

hey guys, so recently i # closed an HB7/8 over FB. she plays volleyball at the university i go to (i play basketball) so id see her around ever so often but she was the one to engage me over the internet. so just tell me what i can improve on.
HB:Hey I'm HB by the way....you know the cripple you met earlier
(i saw her that day in the training room with a sprained ankle and tears making her eyes glossy)
ME:I don't remember you.... Ha jk hey! I'm Joak! how is your ankle?!
HB:It's feeling a little bit better how did your practice go?
ME:good! and it wasnt bad but I got hurt a few days ago so i didnt do too much. i guess we are both cripples ha. ru a freshmen ?
HB:No I'm a junior haha but last year was my first year at the university
ME:oh ha i never saw you last year but then again i didnt get out much ha , where did you transfer from?
HB:college in LA.....but I grew up here and I went to the High school in town
ME:oh thats awesome! i went to highschool right by you ! and (college in LA) was one of the places i would have played bball. small world. so since you grew up in (town university is in) i bet you know all the really good places to places to eat huh ha
HB:That's cool! I feel like it's weird we never knew each other in high school and yes I do know ashland very well
yea i know! it takes us both being hurt to meet each other ha and good cause i have eaten in few places here but i feel like with it being such a weird place (town the university is in) should have better or at least odder food ha so i think i just dont know it well enough to find those spots ha and since your such a pro at all things (town university is in) ha you could show me all the spots i have been missing out on!
HB:Yeah for sure
HB:Here's my number (number)
ME:k il be sure to text you mine!
HB:Sounds good

i tried to make sure i didnt ask for anything ( # , or to go out to eat), it went well i just know that it could always go better. So lay it on me guys!

Author:  vhou812 [ Wed Oct 16, 2013 4:49 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Critique my game!

Looks to me like it went fine. You're in like flynn. Just let her come to you. When she does, just don't give off a negative vibe and don't ask her for anything. Let her lead herself right to you.

One piece of advice, lay off the "ha". At least mix it up a little bit.

Author:  Joak [ Wed Oct 16, 2013 5:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Critique my game!

Quote:
Looks to me like it went fine. You're in like flynn. Just let her come to you. When she does, just don't give off a negative vibe and don't ask her for anything. Let her lead herself right to you.

One piece of advice, lay off the "ha". At least mix it up a little bit.
Thanks so much vhou812, il work on the "ha"s. she doesn't have a bitch shield so no negs are need to destabilize her confidence, im just going to be charming. im not sure if this is an f close though im not sure what game to run to get there

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