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Author:  jemry [ Sat Jun 22, 2013 8:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Can you check my profile ?

I keep trying with online dating for a while, not much of a success. Tried different approaches, strAtegies and not much of a success comparing to the messages I sent. Maybe is the messages or maybe a profile but I want start fresh again. Tell me what you think of my profile. If you can give me any advice, thanks
okcupid.c o m/profile/frosty_dreamer/?cf=profile

Author:  GhostMan [ Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:51 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Can you check my profile ?

Get rid of:
"I have got a dark passenger in me" (not sure what you are referencing but it sounds kind of serial-killerish)
also remove:
"You should message me if
You weight less than me. I want to feel like a man when i hold you, not the other way round." Even if this is true, it makes you sound shallow.

I would rephrase your whole "I like to provide" thingy part and say something more like: "I have always valued and taken care of special people that are close to me -- be it friends, family or my relationship.


remove "And so by extension of that I guess I'm...looking for someone to love me? No one ever said this dating thing would make sense. Haha." sounds too needy is all.

You only need 3 pictures: one full body, one portrait (chest and face) and one with you involved in an activity, preferably one relevant to your life.
- good luck

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