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Author:  SocietyofCool [ Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:44 pm ]
Post subject:  My Awesome Myspace Page - Thoughts?
Can I get an outside opinion from you all on this profile? It's mine

http://www.myspace.com/americanicon101
Author:  Mister_GQ [ Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:24 pm ]
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what did u change?
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:47 pm ]
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not sure whatcha mean?

i updated it a lot in the past 2 months.
Author:  Mister_GQ [ Sat Feb 09, 2008 10:20 pm ]
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hopefully this isnt too harsh but, im no myspace expert, but.

that page looks like ur dying to fall in love and ur pic looks soooooo the notebook-ish its not even funny, ur planning on sarging with that page? come on bro it hasnt changed from last time i evaluated it. put some masculine stuff up!
Author:  Chino Kapone [ Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:26 pm ]
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Ill agree with eveyrthing GQ said.

And did you really need to start a second thread about this?

YOU SHOULD ONLY HAVE THAT BACKGROUND IF YOU HAVE A VAGINA!
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 3:57 am ]
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Thanks for the input.
Yeah, I'm in some photos but not others. Those are my college/highschool buddies. Put them up cuz it adds to my value I'd think.
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 4:00 am ]
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Quote:
hopefully this isnt too harsh but, im no myspace expert, but.

that page looks like ur dying to fall in love and ur pic looks soooooo the notebook-ish its not even funny, ur planning on sarging with that page? come on bro it hasnt changed from last time i evaluated it. put some masculine stuff up!
Suggestions for more masculine stuff?
Author:  JUSTINcredible! [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 4:34 am ]
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Quote:
Quote:
hopefully this isnt too harsh but, im no myspace expert, but.

that page looks like ur dying to fall in love and ur pic looks soooooo the notebook-ish its not even funny, ur planning on sarging with that page? come on bro it hasnt changed from last time i evaluated it. put some masculine stuff up!
Suggestions for more masculine stuff?
Any pics that have DHV spikes.

We should all know what those are.

- :D
JUSTINcredible!
"make the strangers
want to spend another
10 secs."
Author:  Chino Kapone [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 5:21 am ]
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Just take down the background period. Myspace will let you add any picture you want to your background. Even a plain myspace background is better than that one.

Something more masculine would be like monster trucks or a half nekkid picture of Jessica Alba. Whatever. Mine is fucking redbull can background cause im addicted to the shit.
Author:  They Call Me Lucid [ Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:12 am ]
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i would honestly think you were gay if you werent in this forum.

since your reading on, it shows you can take friendly criticism... we can continue:

the background screams womanly emotions. your picture is a glamor shot. unless your brad pit. dont do this. have one of you with friends or you doing something. something that gives you character.

the about me screams creeper in my opinion. the who i would like to meet section sounds like you read up on it but it didnt quite hit the nail it was going for. it sounds like you are trying to hard or you think you are at some level that you are not (which is fortified by the pictures on the side where you are off to the side. at least the guy in the background has an arm around his neck). the pics are good for now but be sure to update soon. on my facebook, i literally removed 2/3rds of my pictures because they were dlv or didnt mean anything.

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ok that said, nice start. it says you are working with the concepts. you dont quite grasp them all yet but you are getting there. the key is to experiment. play around with differnt dhv things in pictures. remember body language in pictures is key. the picture in music section has the most girls but is the picture that hurts you the most. that is not dhv. any guy can barge into the side and get a picture. the best one is the one below where you are flanked by women. it would have been better if you didnt have your arms wrapped around their necks but on their backs.

i mean... this is all minuscule stuff but if you want it perfect, something worth considering. just change your background for a quick fix but in the future, work on other more specific stuff to fine tune it
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:34 am ]
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Quote:
i would honestly think you were gay if you werent in this forum.

since your reading on, it shows you can take friendly criticism... we can continue:

the background screams womanly emotions. your picture is a glamor shot. unless your brad pit. dont do this. have one of you with friends or you doing something. something that gives you character.

the about me screams creeper in my opinion. the who i would like to meet section sounds like you read up on it but it didnt quite hit the nail it was going for. it sounds like you are trying to hard or you think you are at some level that you are not (which is fortified by the pictures on the side where you are off to the side. at least the guy in the background has an arm around his neck). the pics are good for now but be sure to update soon. on my facebook, i literally removed 2/3rds of my pictures because they were dlv or didnt mean anything.

------------------------------------

ok that said, nice start. it says you are working with the concepts. you dont quite grasp them all yet but you are getting there. the key is to experiment. play around with differnt dhv things in pictures. remember body language in pictures is key. the picture in music section has the most girls but is the picture that hurts you the most. that is not dhv. any guy can barge into the side and get a picture. the best one is the one below where you are flanked by women. it would have been better if you didnt have your arms wrapped around their necks but on their backs.

i mean... this is all minuscule stuff but if you want it perfect, something worth considering. just change your background for a quick fix but in the future, work on other more specific stuff to fine tune it
I took your advice well however the "glam" shot is my headshot. I also am an actor on the side so that is normal. It's actually a professional shot so if anything that would be DHV I'd think. Other than that, check out the profile now. Less fem
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:48 am ]
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Lucid, I am alllowing you to re-write the "Who I'd like to meet" part. You can post it here when finished ;)
Author:  SocietyofCool [ Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:34 pm ]
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Guys, check it out now...

You will be amazed, trust me ..

Remember, keep your minds open when you view it because you will automatically feel the vibes that get shot out to ya.
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