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| Author: | Sanojio [ Sun May 26, 2013 10:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | OKC Critique boys |
http://www.okcupid.com/profile/jramsey10 I get an ok response rate but as you can tell from my profile I don't take it too serious. Any suggestions? Constructive criticism welcome, just not asshole criticism. lol |
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| Author: | dlightmen [ Mon May 27, 2013 12:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: OKC Critique boys |
Actually not bad at all. It's written very well, I might add. You may want to add some variety to your pictures though. I'd leave the written part as is. |
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| Author: | TheFury [ Wed May 29, 2013 5:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: OKC Critique boys |
It's pretty decent actually. A Bit long on the section about the movies etc. One thing I would do is change your login name to a catchy header or name, not just jramsey. Unlike other dating sites where you can have a headline, a good catchy profile name gives you a little added boost. |
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