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| Author: | the5thace [ Sat May 18, 2013 8:19 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Do you think my POF profile is a bit too harsh? |
Tag-Line I'm kind of an a**hole .... (Yep, its right out of the video) My self-summary Well, I was thinking about posting a picture of my d*** just to piss people off but that would make it too easy for you to get away . . . Anyway, I'm really just a simple kind of a guy. Food + Sex + Exercise + Rest = Total satisfaction. Not that that's all I aspire to in life but rather you will not find me whinging about anything once those things are satisfied. Also, I'm not a "fun monkey" and you won't find me stumbling home from Dicey's at 2.30am on a Tuesday shouting obscenities at people. I will however go out and have a good time with anyone and everyone. I'm a straight talker and sometimes people can't handle my honesty and girl, if you should be on a treadmill I'll tell you that you should be on a treadmill. Certainly keeping fit and maintaining a good diet is also a large part of my life. I'm always trying to improve and don't wan't anyone slowing me down. What I’m doing with my life? Doing an Msc computer science conversion course in UCD and Freelance Interpreter. Favorite books, movies, shows, music, and food I can appreciate a lot of good music. If I was to clearly identify my preference then it would be early 80's British heavy metal. That would include Iron Maiden, Ufo, Black Sabbath, Pink Floyd etc. Other then that you can catch me listening to anything from Daft Punk to Jack Johnson and Dimmu Burgir. I actually like to read history books at my spare time. Last book I read was about Napoleon. I spend a lot of time thinking about Fluffy kitten's, playing the guitar, poking dead things, kamasutra but mostly just sex. . . . First Date A game of Jenga is the best way to figure a person out. |
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| Author: | JRBobDobbs [ Sat May 18, 2013 10:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Do you think my POF profile is a bit too harsh? |
the only things i could say is you come off really cocky. The part about food+sex etc tells me you only want a woman for sex. Which in the case may be true or not. but likely 80% of women will just close your profile and look for another guy. Its PoF not adult friend finder, don't let it be known that you want to get laid until after you take them out. Women may be sluts, but they do not want to advertise it or be made to feel like a slut(unless in private) for the most part. They like to think they make you earn it, whether you do or not makes no difference. |
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| Author: | the5thace [ Sun May 19, 2013 12:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Do you think my POF profile is a bit too harsh? |
Thanks for the feedback. I'll think about adding something to the equation to soften it up. Is it cocky good or cocky bad? Since I've changed it today I've gotten one good reply from a solid HB 7 saying she likes my profile. |
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| Author: | Profile Diva [ Sun May 19, 2013 6:31 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Do you think my POF profile is a bit too harsh? |
Hey - from a woman's POV it's more than a bit harsh. I understand you want to give some sort of shock value but mentioning your dick in the first line is really a turn off, and makes you sound like a juvenile. Most girls would stop reading after that which is too bad because the rest isn't too bad. MUST recommend that you avoid advertising the fact that you will tell a girl that she needs to "get on the treadmill". Nobody is forcing you to choose a woman you don't like the look of, and this makes it sound like you will constantly be holding a girl to YOUR standard of what she should look like. Again - HUGE turn off. Women, even hot ones, are all insecure about their looks and their weight, and the last thing they want is some guy whose going to make them feel bad about it. Just from food for thought from a female. |
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| Author: | the5thace [ Sun May 19, 2013 12:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Do you think my POF profile is a bit too harsh? |
@Diva Yeah, that's a fair comment. Although where are you located and how many random pictures of male junk will you see doing a random search over POF? |
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