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Author:  TightBelt [ Wed May 01, 2013 11:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Dating Profile First Attempt
I'm 23. An Economics graduate. I build technology businesses in London and love what I do.

I like working hard. Swimming. South Park (like A LOT). Talking about fonts and how websites are designed. BIG breakfasts. Wearing a dressing gown.

I don't like English tea. People that don't like pets. People that don't like kids. And I tolerate people that don't like to drink milk by itself.

Message me if you're a good egg and you feel like you haven't been discovered. And if things around you don't consistently turn into drama.

I basically looked at the confident girls profiles - and they keep it pretty short and pretty sweet - and tend to ignore the different sections on the profiles (this is OKQupid) - so I did the same.

The content is pretty much me. I love the work I do, I'm after a LTR so I kind of want to qualify for that type of girl. Girls that like kids and girls that like pets are important to me. I also don't want drama.

I'm not sure about the last paragraph - I feel like it puts my head a little too far up my own ass.

I'm also not sure about the 'good egg' part - as girls are NASTY (in the good way) - but I'm in the mood for a girl that's kind and good - the majority of the time ;).

I would love to hear any thoughts.

Thanks PUAs!
Author:  GKS [ Thu May 02, 2013 12:53 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Dating Profile First Attempt
I like the idea of mirroring hot girls' profiles. However, the profile seems to be a bit choppy and all over the place since you're just listing things. It also lacks a bit humor and hooks.

Here's some ideas you can try:
- Make it a short DHV story instead, you can make a funny story about how you don't like tea, etc...
- Or pick something you're passionate about and talk about it. It's interesting, it stands out and it shows you have something going on.
- Add a bit humor and make your job sound incredibly fun even if you hate it.
- Choose wisely what you like to tell them if you're gonna make such a short profile. Ask yourself if the quality or fact would help you appear more interesting and be more successful with your game. For example, the fact "you don't drink milk by itself" doesn't really contribute to anything here.

Another thing to keep in mind is that for those hot girls, their profiles can be random as fuck and there're still hundreds guys message them because for us men, look is more appealing. I can guarantee you that you make a decision about a girl before you even read their profile. On the other hand, women do pay attention to the details. So you can't afford to be all over the places like them. Make the details on your profile serve their purposes.
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