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Author:  SilkRoad [ Sat Mar 23, 2013 4:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Profile critique

Hi guys,

I've just got back to this and because of exams I thought online would be easier on my time.

I know my pics could probably be better but not sure what kind of photos I should have etc.

Any recommendations you have on my POF profile would be much appreciated.

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Peace
Silk

Author:  SilkRoad [ Mon Mar 25, 2013 1:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile critique

A little help guys, not sure if it's my photos or my about me section.

Girls like my opener because they check my profile out but then don't reply.

www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=52184910

Author:  Mr.Jowee [ Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:06 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile critique

Cocky doesn't work as well on the internet as everyone will have you believe. I've gotten better success with vague, off-the-wall humor. And you might want to use a different pic as your main one.

Author:  Finesse! [ Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile critique

Man your pics are good apart from your main one in the vest, delete that one. They say educated, social and seem to be having a good time.

First line is fun and curious, even I want to know the answer ha. I'd get rid of the second paragraph and change it to something different but that's just me.

Notes:

*Update your interests to what some girls will have, take a browse* i.e Films, Music...

Get rid of the word 'afraid' in your last line. I know you say (Don't be) beforehand but it just embeds that feeling into a person. For example 'I'm not a psychopath'.. people may feel uneasy by it even though you are saying 'I'm not'..

Author:  SilkRoad [ Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile critique

Thanks guys, I've changed it up and have started getting replies

Hopefully this will be a good adjunct to my irl game

Silk

Author:  Muzz [ Fri Mar 29, 2013 9:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Profile critique

I'd find a picture of you smiling. Girls think that if you don't smile it's because you're hiding your bad teeth.

Author:  Profile Diva [ Wed Apr 03, 2013 8:46 am ]
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