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| Author: | Lost508 [ Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:42 am ] |
| Post subject: | pof profile review |
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=52194855 Hello above is the link, currently got out of a relationship and decided to try out pof, im going to leave for boot camp in a few months so i was wondering what you guys thought about it and if there were any reviews you guys would change// modify. thanks for your time and effort, hoorah! |
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| Author: | Denvernow [ Mon Mar 11, 2013 3:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pof profile review |
Good things: - handsome young dude - picks with girls looks friendly and not creepy (good job) - heading to the military, shows responsibility and reliability. Some things: - use clear profile pic - don't use mirror pics - have friends take pics of you - headline is bland - "entrepreneur" sounds bogus. What do you really do. Don't lie. - "I'll kick your butt" sounds like you're threatening them with violence. - reading book pic looks like you're fake reading. - correct punctuation - MMA, cage fighting, firecracker wars, untamed energy ... Makes you seem violent - remove cliches - saying you like art sounds fake, because all you talk about are physical, fighting interests. - first date: surprise me makes you look lazy (the guy is supposed to take care of the girl) - status: no commitment and hangout makes it seem like all you want is sex and you don't care about people and aren't serious. - capitalize first words of sentences. (All lowercase looks childish) That's enough to get started. |
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| Author: | Muzz [ Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pof profile review |
Nothing makes you stand out at all. |
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| Author: | Mr.Jowee [ Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pof profile review |
All solid advice. I'd replace the fifth picture with a decent headshot taking by someone else, smiling or laughing naturally, and set it as the main pic. Sounds typical/cliche, but compare a nice picture to the other profile pics of men in your age range to see what I mean. Nearly all fall into two categories; bland or douched up. Ironically, having the stereotypical Glamourshots head shot will separate you from the crowd. |
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