Delete the first paragraph, make the photo with the girls your display and edit your hobbies and first date to something more unique.
Other than that I liked some of your lines such as 'the villain you route for' that's cool, may steal it
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| Author: | Mike8016 [ Tue Dec 04, 2012 11:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my POF profile |
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47815905 |
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| Author: | Mike8016 [ Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my POF profile |
Bump |
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| Author: | Chinopants [ Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:40 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my POF profile |
http://www.stumbleupon.com/su/2fYGUu/:Y ... scottyd79/ This is how its done |
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| Author: | Finesse! [ Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my POF profile |
Delete the first paragraph, make the photo with the girls your display and edit your hobbies and first date to something more unique. Other than that I liked some of your lines such as 'the villain you route for' that's cool, may steal it
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| Author: | Finesse! [ Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Critique my POF profile |
Delete |
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