allright i try to help
-you are fucking tall, good
show it on a pic, girls like tall guys 
-you listen to metal i guess from the shirt, nothign bad about it, try to wear a neutral shirt, so girls dont get scared off at first
-make a headline, anything funny and catchy.
-about pics, try to add this:
a. good pic of myself
b. pic of me doin crazy stuff like skydive
c. pic with male friends hanging out
d. pic with some hot females (pre selection)
c. party pic
d. pic of you playing a insturment, painting, whatever special skills you can do!
-if you dont have any of these pics, make something crazy! dont photoshop
-you brag a big too much with your MMA and cooking skills, brag less and add a pic where where you cook something. da a proof now
-same goes with guitar. ad a pic of you rocking the shit away!
-"who enjoys making people laugh" a clown makes that. flip it to indirect like "chances are big that your abs will hurt the day after you met me, cuz it can get quite funny with a lot of laughing
* get the sense?- "But don't worry if that isn't your thing" dont write that. you are how you are, a alpha male doesnt change his style for a woman
-"Most of the time I would rather just joke around, but I can be serious if I have to be." sounds like a job application
- might wanna add a stupid first date
Here's mine, feel free to adapt some style, just dont copy paste
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=46477396
btw. i have too much DHV pics, 8 are too less
but POF in my area is too unpopular, sadly i have brasilian chicks writing me haha