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| Author: | SlyDog7 [ Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:35 pm ] |
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I met this Girl who in my journal I've named 'Sarah'. This is our conversation over the last week. I got her fb a week ago friday after meeting her in a local club but I was so drunk I don't remember the initial encounter but I saw her the day after at a local firework display and we talked a little. This conversation follows on from that encounter. Code: 09:13
SlyDog7
You managed to get up this morning then? :P
09:14
Sarah
Nooo :( x
09:15
SlyDog7
oh dear :P at least you can miss ya meeting now :L - although I think i'd of gone back to bed if I was you haha
09:21
Sarah
Nooo can't hun defo got to go an cbaaa
09:22
SlyDog7
I felt the same at half 6 this morn nice shower and hot choc sorted me out thou :) Ah whats it for then? You got a job?
09:32
Sarah
Ahhh that's gay lol haha and nah job search x
09:34
SlyDog7
Ahhh hows that been going? So hard SPAM ent it :(
What sort of job you after? x
09:39
Sarah
Anythink lol jus want a job to enrolve around college x
09:41
SlyDog7
Ah fair enough - Sure you'll find something soon enough :D
09:42
Sarah
Yeah hope soo had to ban xmas :( x
09:48
SlyDog7
Ye I've cancelled christmas too and I have a job :L - I spent a fortune last year and no point really xx
09:50
Sarah
Ahh I kno I mannaged to spend 200 pound on 20 people last year then 100 on my mum this year I'm like arghhh xx
09:53
SlyDog7
I spent loads last year - Went away for a week with my ex and we ended up shopping all week cus it was too cold to do much else. I spent like £1000 on my credit card on random presents for people - Still paying it off now :L
10:05
Sarah
Fukkin hell I got a 500 pound off the bank an still paying tha haha xx
10:07
SlyDog7
awww ({) You could clear that in a month thou if you got an okay part-time job :)
10:08
Sarah
I kno yeah I pay 45 pound a month lol x
10:09
SlyDog7
At least your paying it off then :) so did you say you were at college?
10:17
Sarah
Yeh but still shit :( and yehh I go fridays xx
10:18
SlyDog7
ye spose :/ What ya studying? xx
10:18
Sarah
Childcaree xx
10:19
SlyDog7
awww cool :) You do that at NEW col? I know a few people who've done that there xx
10:21
Sarah
Nbaaa I don't lol xx
10:22
SlyDog7
Ah fair enough :L xx
10:28
Sarah
Lol xx
10:29
SlyDog7
Not gone to your meeting yet? what time is it? xx
10:31
Sarah
Its 11 lol rearranged itr cause I woke up late lol xx
10:31
SlyDog7
Ah fair enough - Was gonna say surely no girl needs to start getting ready like 3+ hours before they go out :L xx
10:32
Sarah
Haha I aint even got any make up on :L just like cbaaaa xx
10:34
SlyDog7
I can never tell when a girl is wearing make-up anyways unless they've overdone it and go all umper-lumper orange :L
10:35
Sarah
Hahah I was wearing some friday and a bit on sunday but that's it lol xxx
10:36
SlyDog7
I can't even remember friday :L but you looked nice sunday haha. Not umper-lumper orange don't worry haha xx
10:37
Sarah
Haha cheers and tbf I dnt member half on friday :L I got a bruise on my bum dnt kno how lmfaooo xx
10:40
SlyDog7
lol oh dear - Na I was gone on friday. Even Banksy (the crazy black toilet guy) said he'd never seen me so hammered *rolls eyes* Oops. I found a message off you in my notes yesteday too said "My name is Sarah" made me laugh :L xx
6 November
15:01
Sarah
reallly? haha xxx
15:03
SlyDog7
Ye you must have wrote it :L How's ya day been? xx
15:03
Sarah
dnt member :L been good thanks got random question wanna go brean so i was like yeah haha xxx
15:04
SlyDog7
Why not - Spontaneous stuff is always the most fun :) Where ya staying? gonna freeze if your camping :-o xx
15:05
Sarah
nah my carVan lol xxx
i was ment togo anyways but not til friday lol itool ben and nath the one year lol xx
15:06
SlyDog7
did ya? I don't remember that. Ye my rents have a caravan too but I haven't been camping with them in years. Its not as fun when your with your rents. I have my tent so normally go somewhere random with mates in the summer if its warm enough :) xx
15:07
Sarah
ahh fair doeos then xxx
15:09
SlyDog7
How long you going down for? xx
15:12
Sarah
a week xxxx
15:16
SlyDog7
Ah cool :) chose the better week for it they had snow down south last week I think xx
15:17
Sarah
ahh i know xxx
15:20
SlyDog7
ye can't imagine caravaning being that fun in the snow - Been in a hot tub in the snow before thou. That was pretty cool :) xx
15:22
Sarah
i wanna be in the snow xxx
15:23
SlyDog7
oh haha I'll cross my fingers for ya then :L xx
15:38
Sarah
Cheers lmaoo xx
Thursday
17:00
SlyDog7
Hey babe, enjoying you holiday? not froze to death yet? xx
17:04
Sarah
hellooo :) yeh its good fanks darling nd naa haha got me onsiee to keep me warm :P xx
17:06
SlyDog7
awww good good - Ye saw your photo looked nice. You love minnie mouse don't ya :L
17:06
Sarah
yeeee ;) hehe and cheers babe xx
17:07
SlyDog7
:) You been out on the nights down there? is it any good? xx
17:07
Sarah
nahh lol only go to the club on sight xx
17:09
SlyDog7
Ah cool :) xx
17:12
Sarah
:) xx
17:14
SlyDog7
You out in your minnie outfit tonight then? xx
17:14
Sarah
nope saturday xx
17:14
SlyDog7
Ah cool :) Just being a poser in your pic then :L xx
17:15
Sarah
yeee i was trying it on an sum1 wanted to see it xx
17:18
SlyDog7
Ah can see why they'd want to ;-) xx
17:19
Sarah
hehe i dno if i shud go out in tha or my onsiee so xx
17:20
SlyDog7
Guess you'll have to decide based on which one is less likely to make you freeze ya nips off - Could get a lil awkard if someone goes as mickey thou :L xx
17:20
Sarah
haha why wud it be akward xxx
17:22
SlyDog7
cus Mickey and Minnie are married mice ent they? :L xx
17:22
Sarah
sooo xx
17:23
SlyDog7
lol it don't matter thought I was being funny :P Been up to much today? xx
17:24
Sarah
ohhh, nope just went shopping died my hair then fuk all xx
17:25
SlyDog7
Ah cool - buy anything nice? You kept it red? xx
17:32
Sarah
it was fukin pink but iv gne red and nah not really lol xx
17:34
SlyDog7
oops sorry :P (I'm a guy we don't do hair colours) I was gonna say pink but thought you'd tell me it was red haha. xx
17:34
Sarah
haha nah xx
17:35
SlyDog7
When you next out in the ditch? xx
17:35
Sarah
i dnooo dnt go out like often x
x
17:37
SlyDog7
Whatcha like to do then? I always say I'm gonna go out less then my mates just drag me out :L xx
17:38
Sarah
haha fair does then my mate lives in stratford so its hrad , and i always go brean haha xx
17:40
SlyDog7
Ye I used to hate that, I went to alcester sixth form and meant going miles to meet mates and stuff. Not too bad now I drive thou :) Can you drive? xx
17:41
Sarah
aww bless ya it is hard but she gets the bus over nah i dont lol im not trusted haha xx
17:44
SlyDog7
haha - I can't talk tbh I've not long crashed :'( but means I can buy a new car now so not bothered lol. I'm off home anyways (Finally :L) maybe talk later xxx
Thursday
23:42
SlyDog7
Hey you had a good night? xx
23:43
Sarah
helooo yeh its been funnny haha how was yours? xx
23:43
SlyDog7
ye really good :) Went pub quiz we lost by a mile but was fun :L xx
23:43
Sarah
haha bless ya thought ur go town hha xxx
23:44
SlyDog7
going town tomorrow - I don't go on a thurs very often these days cus work xx
23:45
Sarah
aww bless ya haha xx
23:46
SlyDog7
I know the downfall of employment - you spend twice as much out cus you have to go at the weekends :L Doing much tomorrow?
xx*
23:47
Sarah
ahh i kno but if u didnt yur be goin out thursday friday and sat :L haha and going into weston then goin the club on the night xx
23:48
SlyDog7
ahhh cool :) I haven't been weston in ages but last time I went they had this well cool sand modelling thing. Its amazing what some people can do xx
23:48
Sarah
yeh they had one this year to go with the olympics but some kids climbed over and messed it up :( xx
23:49
SlyDog7
ahhh what assholes! HT
hate people who do things like that* xx
23:49
Sarah
i know yeah xx
23:50
SlyDog7
How come you changed your profile pic? You looked way cuter in the minnie mouse onesie xx
23:50
Sarah
haha cause i wanted too hehe nah i dno it be sexy minnie mouse on saturday lol xx
23:53
SlyDog7
Ye i'm not sure which I preferred out of those two. Sexy or cute...? You look gorgeous in them both tbh :) when you back from brean again? xx
23:53
Sarah
hehe goood :D and naa im here til monday lol xx
23:54
SlyDog7
ah got a day to recover from saturday before the journey back then :)xx
23:55
Sarah
yeeee thanks god haha xx
23:55
SlyDog7
I know ye theres nothing worse than being stuck in a car for 3 hours or w/e hungover! xx
23:56
Sarah
yeeeh did that last end of seaosn not good :( xxx
23:58
SlyDog7
Ahhh I bet. Just makes ya feel ten times worse suck in a warm car don't it. I best go bed anyways work in the morning :'( Have a good holiday and I might cya sometime when your back? Text me? Night xx
23:59
Sarah
yeh il txt u when im bak as dnt get much signal round here its shit :(night hun have fun at work il enjoy ma holiday haha xx
00:00
SlyDog7
haha fair enough :L I'm sure ya will - try and remember it ;-) night xx
00:00
Sarah
hehe xxx
Monday
21:01
SlyDog7
I'll come town thursday if you like? I normally go anyways. Who ya going with? xx
21:04
Sarah
ahh dnt so pissed off haha fed up of being ditched all the fukin time for some fukin fat slag that just ruins the night whens shes drunk anyways!! xx
21:05
SlyDog7
Was that message to me :S xx
21:05
Sarah
haha sorry bwt that little rant hahaxx
21:07
SlyDog7
I was well confused then... I was like... I've got a lil beer gut but I wouldn't say fat slag :L Whats up? xx
21:08
Sarah
haha :L :L everythink lol xx
21:09
SlyDog7
Oh dear - that don't sound good :/ no wonder you wanna drink :L xx
21:10
Sarah
yep shame tbf iv had a lovely weekend :( xxx
21:11
SlyDog7
What's caused you to be stressed now then? :s just need a hot choc and a cuddle :P xx
21:12
Sarah
i know yeah with marshmellows and chocolate flake topped and some cream haha xx
21:13
SlyDog7
Ahhh sounds good :) shame you don't live close I actually have all of that bar the flake xx
21:14
Sarah
haha gutted wished i lived closer , il be popping round in my onsiee haha xx
21:15
SlyDog7
Haha your welcome anytime in that onesie ;-) xx
21:16
Sarah
haha xxx
21:19
SlyDog7
Can still go out Thursday if you wanna thou? Pre-drink at mine bring two friends n can share a taxi up? xx
21:25
Sarah
il try haha xx
21:26
SlyDog7
I dunno who I'll know up there but Its a thursday I'll always know a few people. I'm a town rat :L Calmed down a bit yet?
xx
21:27
Sarah
haha bless ya lol and yeh i have xx
21:31
SlyDog7
Ah gdgd :) I'll save you a marshmallow for when your next stressed then :P You live in redditch/studley. I'm sure it won't be long! :L
21:33
Sarah
haha studley lol xx
21:35
SlyDog7
I can't wait to move away from this town... Its so dull. I loved living in Derby was so much better. xx
21:39
Sarah
haha samee!! all the fun things up westion/brean/burnham il rather be there xx
21:41
SlyDog7
Don't blame ya :) At least there's always summat going on there - and ppl by the sea just seem happier :L anyways I'm off to watch walking dead. Let me know if you wanna come thurs :) xx
21:42
Sarah
okaywill do hun xx
Today
07:14
SlyDog7
You okay? What ya been crying for? :( xx
Today
10:14
Sarah
ahh just on a downer last night hun thats all xx
10:16
SlyDog7
Ye I guess we all have days like that :/ As long as your okay :) Got any plans for today? xx
10:19
Sarah
yeh im fine now and nope stay in bed & not move :D xxx
10:21
SlyDog7
Ah I'm well jel - Beats my day. I'm stuck in work till 5.30ish - I don't do much while I'm here thou and even less now i'm leaving :L xx
10:39
Sarah
aww bless ya haha , xx
10:41
SlyDog7
Ye could be worse... Picking my new car SPAM :) Its well exciting! Can't wait for it to come xx
10:47
Sarah
true lol and aww what car u gettin xx
10:50
SlyDog7
Still decided but it'll either be a new Seat Ibiza, Ford Fiesta 2012, Peugeot 208 or Renault Clio. Just comparing prices and fuel economy and all the boring stuff now :L xx
10:59
Sarah
aww bless ya haha xxx
Today
15:30
SlyDog7
Decided to get out of bed then? :P xx
16:01
Sarah
yeah xxx
16:02
SlyDog7
lol :P Guess there is only so much jeremy kyle anyone can watch :L xx
16:02
Sarah
didnt watch it lol xxx
16:03
SlyDog7
Ah your my type of girl then :L - I can't stand Jezza... Just something about the show just winds me up... xx
16:03
Sarah
aww haha xxx
16:05
SlyDog7
Not got plans for tonight? xx
16:09
Sarah
nope uu xxx
16:09
SlyDog7
Dunno might get a few friends together and go pub. Texting people now xx
16:10
Sarah
ahh fair does xxx
16:11
SlyDog7
Won't be a rowdy one mind - work in the morning still and am thinking town thursday etc. You got college friday? xx
16:11
Sarah
yeh i have :/ xxx
16:12
SlyDog7
Awww you not enjoy it then? :L xx
16:27
Sarah
yeh but i wanna go out lol xxx
16:28
SlyDog7
oh haha :L - Just go and drink early so you sober up a lil towards the end? I always tell myself that but it never happens. I just get trashed and have to drag myself to work the next day xx
16:35
Sarah
haha yeah but i wudnt get up lmaoo cause im lazy haha xxx
16:38
SlyDog7
tut tut :P - I don't get much of a chance to lie in at mine even if I do try my best. I have a downstairs bedroom and two noisy foster bros :L Fancy joining me at the pub later? xx
16:40
Sarah
haha got no money hun and haha thats not good xx
16:41
SlyDog7
I didn't say you had to drink :L I know ye... I love kids but not at like 7am! xx
16:48
Sarah
haha xxx
16:50
SlyDog7
Gimmee your number anyways and if I ent up at a pub in studley I'll send you a text, I might even buy you a drink :P xx
17:22
Sarah
haha okay il try lol xxxx
17:26
SlyDog7
Wuu2? I'm so bored at work. I've literally done nothing workwise today xx [/code]I know its a little long but any feedback is appreciated. |
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| Author: | Snarg [ Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:43 pm ] |
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I hate to say it, but you're going to have to shorten that. I don't think anyone is going to want to sit there and read that. Especially with the ADHD-style grammar. |
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