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Author:  GoalRocker [ Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:16 am ]
Post subject:  Ha Ha Ha -- Guys, Critique This!
Critique my attempt to build attraction and be difficult on a classmate who is asking me a favor...

Girl:
boy?
Boy:
girl?
Girl:
Boy!
Boy:
Girl!
Girl:
hey~~
Girl:
did u do the bio?
Girl:
yes?
Boy:
i'm going to do it after i make it hard... (thought? :lol: )
Boy:
sorry, finish the hard stuff. 8)
Boy:
yourself?
Girl:
so not done yet?
Girl:
I forgot to bring my text!!
Boy:
LMAO... luckily for you, we have it first period!
Boy:
you can come to school early!
Girl:
yeah
Girl:
haha
Girl:
do u have a scanner?
Boy:
that depends...
Girl:
haha
Boy:
what do i get in return?
Girl:
haha
Girl:
NVM!!! haha
Boy:
haha -- well i'm typing mine out right now, i could send it later...
Boy:
if you're online.
Girl:
ok!
Girl:
well I gotta go!
Boy:
all right... cya!
Author:  JSmooth [ Wed Jan 09, 2008 2:46 pm ]
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It sounds like too classmates talking about an assignment due. I see you were being playful with her when she asked you about the scanner, but she went cold on you. It looks like you have comfort but need to revisit attraction. I don't know if this is the whole conversation or not, but there isn't a lot to go on here.
Author:  Thugnificient [ Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:30 pm ]
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I really don't know whats going on in the convo, is she trying to get you to do her homework
Author:  Square [ Wed Jan 09, 2008 10:12 pm ]
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After you said we can meet in the morning and she said " yeah" I would have said alright see you then, your bringing breakfast for me right? Something like that. Thats if I read that all correct. There was only one boy right? Some were all caps other all lower at first.
Author:  GoalRocker [ Wed Jan 09, 2008 10:20 pm ]
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It sounds like too classmates talking about an assignment due. I see you were being playful with her when she asked you about the scanner, but she went cold on you. It looks like you have comfort but need to revisit attraction. I don't know if this is the whole conversation or not, but there isn't a lot to go on here.
Thanks for your reply, jsmooth37076! Yes -- we do have comfort. How would you amplify attraction? She is the one who approached me online because she wants a scanner.

And yes, we are both trying to finish our bio homework.

This is the whole conversation and this is how most of my conversations run. As you can see I REALLY need brutal critiquing...So let me know what's up.
Author:  chio [ Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:58 pm ]
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It sounds like too classmates talking about an assignment due. I see you were being playful with her when she asked you about the scanner, but she went cold on you. It looks like you have comfort but need to revisit attraction. I don't know if this is the whole conversation or not, but there isn't a lot to go on here.
Thanks for your reply, jsmooth37076! Yes -- we do have comfort. How would you amplify attraction? She is the one who approached me online because she wants a scanner.

And yes, we are both trying to finish our bio homework.

This is the whole conversation and this is how most of my conversations run. As you can see I REALLY need brutal critiquing...So let me know what's up.
Invite the girl over to finish your bio homework together and bang the crap out of her when you get the homework done
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