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| Author: | brewface [ Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Critique profile...just looking for more inspiration |
I'm pretty solid when it comes to messaging and can usually get a profile view and the occasional resposne. I want to take it to the next level so I expect brutal honesty. My about me portion is bland and i'm not sure about the pictures except one with me and my scottish friend. scout away. I have a very sarcastic personality and would like to convey that through my profile, while creating a bit of mystery about myself. I'm also surprisingly confident for my level of attractiveness. ian8889 |
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| Author: | Crypto [ Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:35 pm ] |
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I dont really see any problems with your profile. A suggestion would be to get a picture of yourself with an actual "smile" on your face. If you look at the pics all of them you have very little true emotion. Girls really pay attention to a good smile! The write up is a little too cocky IMHO, but you are in a different age range than I am so this may be the right way to go about it. Maybe add something about the girl you are looking for. "I am looking for someone who not only wants to have fun, but knows how to let herself" Peace... |
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| Author: | brewface [ Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:08 pm ] |
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ok i've changed it up a bit, added new pictures and toned down the cockiness. After re-reading i agreed with you that it was pushing the cocky tone a bit too far instead of seeing the sarcastic angle i was going for. |
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