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Author:  RandomBiscuit [ Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Criticize my Pof
Hey Guys,

Sorry for another of these, probably been hundreds.

Recently got onto it through a mates advice, but been having NO success. I have changed my profile many a times, experimented with cocky funny, different headlines etc to no avail.

I am talking to a few girls, but the turn around rate is brutal. I have never said, hi, how are you none of that bollocks, every message is creative and revolves around there profile or ive tried the standard ones suggested here.

All criticism and advice is greatly appreciated!

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=40551287
Author:  SuperSajin [ Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:45 pm ]
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Sh#tty pics, lacks haircut, not shaved, look like a loser with no job, flabby physique. No wonder ur not getting replies.
Author:  RandomBiscuit [ Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:54 pm ]
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Cheers bro, appreciate the honesty. Always figured the pics would be the thing dragging it down.

Dunno why im iffy about putting up photos with other people, i'll try and get some better photos.

Aside from those, whats your opinion on the text stuff?

Edit, should add, my main pic, i only added a few days ago.
Author:  Crypto [ Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:17 pm ]
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Pics are pretty poor quality...Show yourself being a bit more social. I think it is not too bad overall, you have a good vibe about the profile. What kind of "reply" rate are you getting with your "personal messages" -vs- "canned openers"? If you are getting replies but then losing them after the openers, then we can advise you based on how the convo's go.

Post a couple of short convo's here if you can!


Peace...
Author:  RandomBiscuit [ Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:34 pm ]
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Canned went well for a week or two, with high response rate. It actually went more quiet when i moved back home.
I tried the 'Id remove that profile pic if i were you :\' and half the time dont even get a viewed me or response.

I've recently started going more genuine and honest.

I said to a HB9

Ciao,

Im gonna level with you, you are easily one of the most attractive girls i have seen that own the 'rocker' vibe. However, beauty is common, and i've learned it doesnt outweigh crazy :P A great vibe and energy are much more important, and I just have this feeling that you're a person who's worth knowing, so I'd like to get to know you better.

So hey, i'm Ant :) x

HB: You made me smile! How dare you!

Me: And why would that be such a bad thing? x

Convo dead, no more response. Similar thing has happened a few times. Primary concern is photos, ill get some sorted later this week hopefully.

Thanks again
Author:  Crypto [ Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:49 am ]
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I have found that the hotter the girl, the lest involved I try to be in the conversation. Keep it very casual IMHO.

I would have replied: "Smile?! I was wrong about you, I think maybe we should break up!" or something of the sort...

Post again when you get the Pics updated.


Peace..
Author:  Oldskool8726 [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:29 am ]
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Bad photo's, The pimping one would be cool if you had a girl either side and the background was in a better place than someones dorm/bedroom.
The profile description doesnt look bad,

Just change your photo's
Author:  newpua2012 [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 6:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Criticize my Pof
Quote:
Hey Guys,

Sorry for another of these, probably been hundreds.

Recently got onto it through a mates advice, but been having NO success. I have changed my profile many a times, experimented with cocky funny, different headlines etc to no avail.

I am talking to a few girls, but the turn around rate is brutal. I have never said, hi, how are you none of that bollocks, every message is creative and revolves around there profile or ive tried the standard ones suggested here.

All criticism and advice is greatly appreciated!

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=40551287



"Dick is free, pussy cost money" ~ Chris Rock.

Good advice!
Author:  RandomBiscuit [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 11:13 am ]
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Thanks guys.

Yeah need more social photo's, out tonight with a wing gonna try and get some good ones. The pimp one i put up as a piss take, funnily enough, i aint really changed much but my responses have increased alot over the past week :S I suppose with the pimp one im not taking myself as seriously. Got a few girls chatting, two of which im meetin early next week.

"Dick is free, pussy cost money" Awesome stuff man haha!
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