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| Author: | Samflynn [ Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | PlentyofFish critique |
Hey guys just looking to see what you guys thought of my profile out of curiosity. I've been tinkering with it a lot lately and gotten mixed results. I started out with Bravo's template, but evolved it to more something I like. Previously I copy and pasted Bravo's "85%" opener but that too has only gotten mixed results and hasn't led to lasting conversations. Let me know what you think. http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?pro ... 571716[url][/url] |
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| Author: | stiffz [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:20 am ] |
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guy, to be honest, I usually crop people out of my pictures, especially if there are girls there.. To me it seems kind of patronizing when I see a girl with a guy, like oh, you can get a guy? Well good for fucking you, moving on. I think you sound too arrogant, you need to brighten up a bit and sound more approachable. But that's just me.  Good luck |
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| Author: | detox75 [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:48 am ] |
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you dont sound arrogant just confident and pictures with hot chicks normally work in your favor. You added some bravoPUa stuff which was good. Make your profile a bit longer and add some more info on what you want for your future showing goals and ambitions. Also im not sure what Brazilian Tai-Jitsu is but most guys who do MMA and BJJ would likely choke you out for that. |
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| Author: | Crypto [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:32 pm ] |
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Make the 1st pic a face pic, get rid of the blurry picture, and put your freaking clothes on! Some girls will read "Ju-Jitsu" and think you like to fight, which when they are reading it may be a turn off, but instinctively they will like that you are capable of fighting. May be better to say that "I like to keep myself in shape and work out often"....Let her find out that you do Ju-Jitsu after you meet up. Otherwise this profile does not suck...I think you don't leave a lot to the imagination but others will say you should put that info out there. Peace... |
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| Author: | detox75 [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:05 pm ] |
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Quote: Ju-Jitsu
wtf Crypto, Frankthetank would choke you out for that 
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| Author: | stiffz [ Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:53 pm ] |
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Jiu-Jitsu
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