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Author:  lableblack6 [ Sat May 19, 2012 5:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Critique my Conversation starting with Darth Vader Opener
Hi PUAs, I started this conversation with a HB9 using the Darth Vader opener, but I didn't manage to move it forward for long. Can you please guide me on what I should've written:

BTW I would also appreciate if you could critique my POF profile. My profile ID is : 29636211


Me/16/2012 12:48:08 AM
Hey, I would remove that picture from your profile

Her/16/2012 12:48:43 AM
Because?


Me/16/2012 12:51:14 AM
I wanted to see if you could take a joke Can you? You are quite
stunning, and I wanted to talk to you. I seem to have one reason
why getting to know you would be a good life decision. Can you
give me another

Her/16/2012 1:11:04 AM
Stunning is the wrong reason for getting to know me


Me/16/2012 1:12:00 AM
Well i like your interests as well :p

lMe/16/2012 1:13:40 AM
So do you really sing Jazz ?

Me/16/2012 12:22:30 PM
Let's play 'would you rather', so would you rather be sitting in a class listening to a lecture or would you prefer giving a lecture yourself ? Your turn

Me/17/2012 7:01:30 PM
Hey, what's up. It's been ages since we last met :-)
Author:  Crypto [ Sat May 19, 2012 6:58 pm ]
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You told her the same exact thing that every other guy tells her hundereds of times a day!

And then you chased her after she was no longer interested.

I have not read/seen her profile but just out of curiosity, do you know anything about Jazz or Jazz Music? I ask, because what if she replied: "Yes I do!" or "I wouldn't put it on my profile if I didn't!"

See where I'm coming from? Your question added no value to her life and asked a question that was already answered in her profile.

Personally I wouldn't get into that personal stuff till a couple texts deeper but if I decided to I would have gone more like this:

"Jazz singer huh? I tend to lean towards XX band. Is that similar to the style of music you're creating?"

This shows you genuinely have some knowledge which is a DHV and if she don't know "XX band" she will certainly look them up which means you enhanced her life. Understand the idea here?

Peace...
Author:  lableblack6 [ Sat May 19, 2012 11:49 pm ]
Post subject: 
Hey, thanks for the reply. Her profile listed Jazz as an interest. This line ""Jazz singer huh? I tend to lean towards XX band. Is that similar to the style of music you're creating?" seems cool, and I should've really used something similar. I understand the idea, but I struggle to come up with such lines myself and end up saying the lines that thousands of other guys are saying. Do we have any sample routines for online sarging that are generic for all HBs ?
Author:  Crypto [ Sun May 20, 2012 6:55 pm ]
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Plenty of "Flirty Text message" examples on this site as well as on the WWW...Once you start understanding it, it will come more naturally. Keep pushing yourself, it will come together!


Peace...
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