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Author:  AznChump [ Tue May 01, 2012 1:00 am ]
Post subject:  Okcupid profile, Please help me improve!

Rip my profile apart. All flame/insult/criticism welcome, as long as it is constructive.
I'm not getting anything, and I'm not sure how to approach a couple of the topics.

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/jamesleboFnlee

Author:  AmazingArt [ Tue May 01, 2012 2:32 am ]
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First of all I think your into is a little bit too cocky. Cause when people usually say they have confidence they don't. Not saying that's true in your case but just in general that's how people perceive it. Okay here is a tip on dating websites. Look at other guys profiles and do exactly opposite of what they do. Be honest and laid back in into and other stuff.

Author:  mrjericho [ Tue May 01, 2012 3:19 am ]
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Amazing is right - your profile displays confidence, you don't have to state the obvious. Also, it says "...you are getting every cent of your month's worth."...do you mean "...you are getting every cent of your money's worth."?

Other than that, it's good.

Author:  AznChump [ Tue May 01, 2012 3:30 am ]
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Hey thanks for the tips so far. I toned down a little bit on the confidence factor, still thinking about ways to write the other parts. How are the pictures looking? Should I get something else?

Author:  jbPUA [ Wed May 09, 2012 5:37 am ]
Post subject:  the okcupid blog

Did you try reading the ok cupid blog? they show you all the statistics and numbers on what kind of photos to post and what will attract the most attention ? I found the okcupid blog 4 myths of about proflle pics to be really helpful

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