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| Author: | Morpheo [ Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique My Profile |
http://www.okcupid.com/profile/leogura I've done a lot of work on it lately. Feel free to rip it apart. Also need feedback on the pictures. |
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| Author: | Nyko26 [ Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:04 am ] |
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Really good profile. I feel i've known you for years. I haven't been on okcupid, but sometimes it feels like there's too much information. On the other hand, girls will probably be able to relate to you on a deeper level. It's written very well and your personality comes out nicely. As for your pictures, the one thing that I noticed is your body language. It's not easy but your shoulders needs to be a bit more back and your chest up. (I'm currently working hard on this myself ). I would remove the last two pics and the one in the parking lot. Less is more. Ninja edit : Ask girls opinion on wich of your pictures are the best. |
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| Author: | Morpheo [ Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:34 pm ] |
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Thanks, made some tweaks to the images based on your suggestions. Would appreciate others' feedback as well. I think good pictures are REALLY important. I'm planning some cool photoshot locatoins for next week. Gotta get this shit handled once and for all. Text alone is not getting me much action. |
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