Okay... First it's too boring and regular. Unless you've got some really, really great eye-candy pics you'll need to work on it.
Second... You come off too techy. I'm a Network Engineer and into tech as well. But you're gonna get labeled computer geek. That is not bad, if you can find a computer geek woman.. But they're few and far between.
The tech stuff is a good DHV, but keep it very moderate and vague. On my profile I just say C++ under languages spoken and mention I've got an Associates.
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Lengthy Sales Picture below, if you do not like advertising move on.
^--- Your very first line basically says, "my profile sucks, don't read it".I'd advise browsing the forums a bit to get in touch with the social dynamics involved in online game.
Also, another thing.. Don't talk about a good sense of humor, you need to display it.
EDIT: you DLV yourself a lot as well. Don't say, "I'm a computer geek.". DHV yourself with something like, "I make all the computer geeks jealous".
That's not the best line, but better than lower your value.
One last thought.... Go over your grammar with a fine tooth comb. If you need to, get out a mid-level grammar book. Posting in forums is one thing.. But on a profile taking a half hour to to perfect grammar and punctuation is HUGE.
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stargate universe, stargate atlantis, doctor who, big bang theory, star trek 2009, heroes, torchwood, starwars, kings speech, transformers, love actually - yea I am being serious that film is epic
Most of those movies are chick-repellant. I'd just say something else.....Good Luck!
