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Author:  TMT [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:30 am ]
Post subject:  POF Profile Criticize ME!!!!
My name's Daniel in my very very humble opinion I would beat you at any drinking game :p I'm a junior in college and scared to graduate in two years, but more scared for my 21st birthday fast approaching. I love to have a good time but there's more to life than going out. I love reading books and enjoy stimulating conversation about intelligent topics, such as which is better, gossip girl or glee? (Definitely gossip girl by the way, monday nights hollar!) I love to laugh and be a dork, so be prepared. Also, sports and the ocean play a big part of my life, so if you're athletic that's a big plus. I'm not looking for any type in particular, however I am NOT looking for:

-a one night stand nor a new wife. There's a happy median called casual or committed.
-a girl with a larger bra size than IQ. I'm not impressed on looks alone. Personality and intelligence will go a long way.
-a person possessing the maturity of a 2 year old. If you're a drama queen contact Hollywood.

However, if you are genuinely an awesome person I would love to talk to you.
Author:  detox75 [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:52 am ]
Post subject: 
cute
harmless
fun
scattered
inconsistent/in-congruent
not serious
not focused
juvenile

If your a very good looking guy it can work because of the light-hearted vibe, if not, I don't really see who is going to go out of their way to date you based on this.
Author:  weaponx [ Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Nice
Funny and different! Many of the guys profiles are all the same they all do wheight training they like to go out with friends e.t.c you have to find away of standing out!

How ever photos are very important not just for looks what activity you are doing in them right angle good brightness, got other friends and family involved and stuff!

You will get a lot of views but most woman don't send messages out they want the guy to write to them.
Author:  SOUL_FIGHTER [ Thu Jan 05, 2012 5:15 am ]
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No man should ever admit to watching gossip girl or glee - save that for the conversation
I think guys who put out the "Not looking for a one night stand" card sound like fucking pansies.

In all honesty, if this wasnt a PUA forum, I'd think you made a profile to look for other men.
But Im not gonna lie, my POF shit sucks.
Author:  Decessum [ Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: POF Profile Criticize ME!!!!
Quote:
My name's Daniel in my very very humble opinion I would beat you at any drinking game :p I'm a junior in college and scared to graduate in two years, but more scared for my 21st birthday fast approaching. I love to have a good time but there's more to life than going out. I love reading books and enjoy stimulating conversation about intelligent topics, such as which is better, gossip girl or glee? (Definitely gossip girl by the way, monday nights hollar!) I love to laugh and be a dork, so be prepared. Also, sports and the ocean play a big part of my life, so if you're athletic that's a big plus. I'm not looking for any type in particular, however I am NOT looking for:

-a one night stand nor a new wife. There's a happy median called casual or committed.
-a girl with a larger bra size than IQ. I'm not impressed on looks alone. Personality and intelligence will go a long way.
-a person possessing the maturity of a 2 year old. If you're a drama queen contact Hollywood.

However, if you are genuinely an awesome person I would love to talk to you.
First off, the "drinking game" thingy sounds like high schoolish boy stuff. Something I would say to my friends. I don't know why you say you are scared, take it off. And DEFINETELY take out that gossip girl vs glee stuff ... that's just, trying to hard to be funny. I do like the larger bra size than IQ thingy, I've used that before, but the thing you're not looking for a night stand just take it off.
Author:  TMT [ Wed Jan 11, 2012 4:36 am ]
Post subject: 
Thank you everyone for the input! I really appreciate it. I made some tweaks such as taking out the one night stand line and gossip girl. Let me know what you think :)

Dear hot women on pof,
My name is Daniel and I'm a junior in college. I'm a giant asshole. I don't care what your profile says and don't give a shit what you think. I'm only interested in you because of your looks and if you're truly dumb as a rock I'll fuck you once then never call. If you suck in bed I'll tell you. Don't take it personal, just fucking fix it. Go to a class or some shit. I'm the fucking shit so get over it.
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