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| Author: | Gizmo1000 [ Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Help with my Pof profile please! |
I know it's not great- but what should I do. Thanking you in advance Username is choffman101 |
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| Author: | dlightmen [ Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:38 pm ] |
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I just looked really quick. Pic with the tiger is good, really good. Take down the bodyshot mirror pic. There are better ways to show off your body. Make it look more natural like water-skiing, or playing football with friends. I noticed at least once, you used "there", instead of their. Small typo, but grammar is a good way to DHV. |
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| Author: | Gizmo1000 [ Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:56 pm ] |
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Cheers- noted and done! |
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| Author: | papichulo818 [ Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:10 pm ] |
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i liked the part about there needing to be a window in the bathroom in case you had to bolt lol i'm stealing that Overall looks good, but I'd add some DHV stuff. Good you have pictures with your 'mates' but I'd mention something about group activities because boxing and working out, and NOT going to bars may be seen is a bit isolating. |
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| Author: | Gizmo1000 [ Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:15 pm ] |
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What of DHV's? (few examples?) Lol boxing is a group activity- I need someone to punch :-p Only messing- noted and il add a group activity, and feel free to use the window line! |
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