done
please tell me if you can see it now. Thanks
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| Author: | iamtheexplorer [ Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | Profile Advice on OKcupid |
Hello PUAs! I am back in the field, after few months of a relationship. And starting off online, as I have just moved to London, dont know many people here to go sarging with them. Anyways, back on the subject, can experts please go through my profile and tell me whats lacking? I dont have a problem opening up with chicks, its easy but for some reason when they visit my profile, i dont get a proper response or no response. My profile id is Iamtheexplorer Thanks in advance Iamtheexplorer |
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| Author: | detox75 [ Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:36 am ] |
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make the profile public so i can review , the profile photo looks good. |
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| Author: | iamtheexplorer [ Fri Nov 11, 2011 10:42 pm ] |
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done please tell me if you can see it now. Thanks |
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| Author: | detox75 [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:12 pm ] |
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your profile is good, not great, id give it a 7/10 You need to correct some of your idiom and syntax, there are a few missing words and incorrect pluralization's that makes you sound like a non-native english writer. Also you need to make the categories like 6 things i cant do without, a little about me, my interests, work for you. Right now your ignoring or demurring them, as if you really don't want to be bothered. You need to fill them out with interesting and funny material, if you dont know what to write just look at guys profiles in New York or London as they have advanced games and many of those guys will have great shit u can use and modify. Remember girls actually do read profiles unlike most guys so you got to make yours talk to their emotions, funny, witty, convey social value , mysterious and exciting |
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| Author: | iamtheexplorer [ Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:38 pm ] |
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Thanks a lot for the feedback.. working on it will post with the changes.
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