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Author:  billmincersucks [ Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Can I have a review of my match.com profile?
A couple of girls have looked at my profile and like it, I think there's room to improve. I want to attract sexy women, not the fat chicks around the corner.

http://www.match.com/profile/Show?UID=9 ... reesrunner
Author:  billmincersucks [ Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:34 pm ]
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Ok, I'm not sure if I'm being ignored or if you have to have a match membership to view my profile so I'll throw the key parts out here. As far as pictures, I have a picture of me my racing gear(distance runner..so singlet and short running shorts..I didn't know about it, but a female friend said girls want to see my body??) Then I have a few other pictures of me having fun such as playing the rock band drums, golfing, wearing a Saints jersey, holding my friend's "toy" dog, and a couple dressed up to go out

Title: Sick of the same old valley guys?

About him & Who he's looking for
I live an active lifestyle, I love to run and compete in 5-10K races, occasionally longer when I want to push myself. I'm kinda fast, but I'll slow down for the right girl. ; )

I'm always interested in challenge and new discovery, so despite having a good paying job with the postal service, I enrolled back in school this year to work towards my MBA in Accounting. Always had a thing for crunching numbers since my childhood when I would try to calculate baseball player's batting averages on my own. Yep - I love sports. I enjoy getting together and hanging out with friends on NFL Sundays, so I can break out my New Orleans Saints gear. Not because I'm one to jump a bandwagon but because I found a Saints hat in the early 90's and have been following them loyally ever since! Only had to wait all those years for them to start winning. That's some serious patience.

I love listening to my XM radio in the car and wondering what random obscure song I'll hear next. I listen to anything from rock to metal to punk to 80s, 90s and everything in between! Some of my favorite pastimes include mini golf, wing night, guitar hero/rock band, dining out and enjoying a quality brew or glass of wine. I am an only child so I gotta warn you that I am a little bit of a momma's boy but definitely able to take care of myself. I'm looking for someone with similar interests that can handle an active lifestyle and get a little bit wild with me!

Send me a wink. I bet we'll both be glad you did.

Interests:
Dining out, Music and concerts, Playing sports, Travel/Sightseeing, Watching sports, Wine tasting
Sports and exercise:
Baseball, Basketball, Football, Golf, Running

Exercise habits:
Exercise 5 or more times per week
Pets:
I like Cats, Dogs

Right now I don’t have any pets, but like animals and enjoy the pets of friends and family.
Political views:
Middle of the Road
Sign:
Don't display my sign
College:
I'll tell you later
For Fun:
Running is one of my favorite pastimes, and I also enjoy working out. Spending time with family and
friends is fun and we might watch some sports games, or go out for drinks and dinner. Other times I may
take in a movie.
Favorite Hot Spots:
Anywhere with good food. Love Mexican, Thai, Hibachi, pizza, wings, burgers. Could be anywhere from a local dive to chain restaurants or fine dining. Bars where you can actually have a conversation and enjoy a good beer.
Favorite Things:
Sports are always near the top of my short list, along with Seinfeld, and 2 1/2 Men. Musically I love 80’s
and 90’s rock music, and old school hip hop. Things I’d hate to live without include my iPhone, running
shoes, and family and friends.
Last Read:
Other than that required for my studies, I haven’t had a chance to read anything lately aside from fantasy sports news(not like I listen to it, I go with my gut rather than listen to the "experts")
Author:  billmincersucks [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 1:25 pm ]
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guys help me out..wound up going on a date with a fatty last night because I think I'm running out of options on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Which I'd be ok with but being that I paid money for this membership, i need some return on the investment!
Author:  dlightmen [ Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:10 pm ]
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guys help me out..wound up going on a date with a fatty last night because I think I'm running out of options on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Which I'd be ok with but being that I paid money for this membership, i need some return on the investment!

Did ya get any? :P

Seriously, why not use okay cupid? We need to log into match.com to see your profile. Not many use match.com. There's free pooty on Cupid and PoF.
Author:  EchoSide [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:54 am ]
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Dude, it's so terribly AFC I don't even know where to start...Look at other guys POF profiles that are listed here in the online section, you're pretty much going to have to start from scratch.

Your pix are REALLY bad...First, your main pic shouldn't be of you in sunglasses...In your second picture it looks like you're hammered and that you with a girl you cropped out...The one of you in a driving range is pointless...Pic with you and a dog, you again look hammered...The only picture that's even remotely good is with you and the drum sticks...The one with you in dress shirt would of been good if you didn't make a face and it didn't have clutter...If you don't have any better pictures, dump them all and just use the drum one until you can find someone to take more. I strongly recommend you post pictures of you in a group of people, ideally looking like the alpha...
Author:  billmincersucks [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 7:00 am ]
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Thanks, crazy thing it is getting me dates and shit, but not really with the girls I truly want. A couple decent prospects but mostly fatties messaging me. Went out with one last night from there who had just a headshot..holy shit hahah


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Dude, it's so terribly AFC I don't even know where to start...Look at other guys POF profiles that are listed here in the online section, you're pretty much going to have to start from scratch.

Your pix are REALLY bad...First, your main pic shouldn't be of you in sunglasses...In your second picture it looks like you're hammered and that you with a girl you cropped out...The one of you in a driving range is pointless...Pic with you and a dog, you again look hammered...The only picture that's even remotely good is with you and the drum sticks...The one with you in dress shirt would of been good if you didn't make a face and it didn't have clutter...If you don't have any better pictures, dump them all and just use the drum one until you can find someone to take more. I strongly recommend you post pictures of you in a group of people, ideally looking like the alpha...
Author:  EchoSide [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:34 pm ]
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Thanks, crazy thing it is getting me dates and shit, but not really with the girls I truly want. A couple decent prospects but mostly fatties messaging me. Went out with one last night from there who had just a headshot..holy shit hahah


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Dude, it's so terribly AFC I don't even know where to start...Look at other guys POF profiles that are listed here in the online section, you're pretty much going to have to start from scratch.

Your pix are REALLY bad...First, your main pic shouldn't be of you in sunglasses...In your second picture it looks like you're hammered and that you with a girl you cropped out...The one of you in a driving range is pointless...Pic with you and a dog, you again look hammered...The only picture that's even remotely good is with you and the drum sticks...The one with you in dress shirt would of been good if you didn't make a face and it didn't have clutter...If you don't have any better pictures, dump them all and just use the drum one until you can find someone to take more. I strongly recommend you post pictures of you in a group of people, ideally looking like the alpha...
lol, yup, the whale's are "gaming" you...I'm concerned you have no idea about "game"...When I stay start from scratch, you realize that you need to be cocky? HBs8+ aren't looking for guys who crunch numbers in their free time, play guitar hero, care why you became a saints fan or that you're a mommas boy...Again, start looking at other profiles here in the online forums...
Author:  billmincersucks [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:58 pm ]
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I'll work on that today at some point while watching football. A girl actually wrote the profile for me after modifying my original(and even worse version). One of my best friend's wife was saying I should put the running picture up as my main picture but honestly, these are girls that I value as friends and aren't what I want in a girlfriend so it makes sense..
Author:  billmincersucks [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:04 pm ]
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I also don't think I have many good pictures for this. Should I use a running picture or shouldn't I? What are the best pictures to use? Isn't it best to just have solo shots rather than with people?
Author:  EchoSide [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:47 pm ]
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I also don't think I have many good pictures for this. Should I use a running picture or shouldn't I? What are the best pictures to use? Isn't it best to just have solo shots rather than with people?
Drumming is the only good one...If you want to go with the running pic, make sure you're, you know, running...Not posing pre/post run...In fact, IMO best with running would be you crossing the finish line...The big problem with the dress shirt pic is the background. You look like you're in a boring cheap apartment with college days clutter...

My advice to you; you seem like you make good money and like guitar hero, buy Rocksmith ($80 game that shows you how to play guitar) and a $100 pawn shop guitar and go with that...Say on your profile you have a PASSION for music and you've recently made some time to practice playing the guitar...Post pics of either you looking "smooth" (no faces) playing the guitar, make sure it doesn't look like a cheap apartment in the background...If you have the means, make it look like your guy/girl friends are watching you playing and are engaged in your playing...

Most people agree that the main photo should only be of yourself and not with other people; reason being some hot girls honestly get 100 messages a day and will never check your profile...If your opener was good enough, don't be surprised if they never look at your profile and reply is a single one work answer such as "lol" or "why?" ...However you need to cover all bases and ensure your displaying alpha...
Author:  billmincersucks [ Tue Nov 15, 2011 12:20 pm ]
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so how's this for improvement..yes I know on the pictures. Still gotta work on that. Gotta resize the drums picture because POF wouldn't take it. Figured I'd put up the ok picture minus the face and clutter and also one of me running away from the field in a race(none of me crossing finish line). I'd say the running one is kind of alpha like a man among boys. I did cheat on my profile. Pretty much copied from a famous PUA but geared it toward me. How is it?

My match one is almost the same except my headline is "your future ex boyfriend"

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=33367640
Author:  JasonW [ Tue Nov 15, 2011 4:29 pm ]
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I'm no expert by any means, and I haven't looked at your profile, but I really don't think that I would use that headline (future ex-boyfriend).
Author:  EchoSide [ Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:28 pm ]
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Your finally work...

I hate the headline but the rest of it is not bad (unlike the last one was)...You're still are asking for a gf....


"In my free time I spend lots of time running and keeping in shape. I hang out with friends, watch sports and movies and am always up for a fun time.. I always try to keep busy doing something. Oh and I'm learning to cook. I have a few select recipes I'm good at but always looking for more

I love to travel (California being my favorite) and am looking to fulfill my bucket list piece by piece. Trying to figure out my next adventure, wanna come? ;)"

I'd shorten it to...

"If I'm not running marathons or learning to play the drums, I am usually having good conversation or watching sports with my friends. I love to travel, especially to California. If you share any of my interests, brownie points to you." Some mystery can go a long way...
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